Question

8．畢業(yè)季也是感恩季．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請給你在高中三年所遇到的人或事物寫一封感謝信，新的內(nèi)容包括：
1．感謝的人或事物；
2．感謝的原因；
3．你的美好愿望．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
DearSamantha，
I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher．From day one，I enjoyed each and every class of yours．（高分句型一）You could always make your lessons informative，educational and enjoyable all at the same time．Every day I looked forward to your class，which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English．（高分句型二）It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself．I enjoyed everything you taught us，from the English language to American culture．The smell of the pancakes we made together in your class is still clear in our minds，and it simply makes my mouth water．
（高分句型三） You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories．You are a great inspiration to us all!
A big and warm"Thank you!"from your beloved student!May you continue to inspire greatness in all of your students!，
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息請寫一封感謝信參加接力，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、感謝的人或事物；感謝的原因；你的美好愿望．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)，就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)并結(jié)合部分一般過去時(shí)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
（高分句型一）You could always make your lessons informative，educational and enjoyable all at the same time．
該句型使用了make+賓語+賓語補(bǔ)足語，informative，educational and enjoyable 三個(gè)形容詞做賓語補(bǔ)足語；
（高分句型二）It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself．
  該句使用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句It was you who…強(qiáng)調(diào)主語you；
（高分句型三） You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories．
該句式使用了whom引導(dǎo)定語從句，whom充當(dāng)賓語；
高級詞匯：informative，educational and enjoyable 有信息的、教育的、有樂趣的；awaken喚醒；inspire激勵(lì)；

解答 Dear Samantha，
      I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher．From day one，I enjoyed each and every class of yours．（高分句型一）You could always make your lessons informative，educational and enjoyable all at the same time．Every day I looked forward to your class，which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English．（高分句型二）It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself．I enjoyed everything you taught us，from the English language to American culture．The smell of the pancakes we made together in your class is still clear in our minds，and it simply makes my mouth water．（高分句型三） You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories．You are a great inspiration to us all!
      A big and warm"Thank you!"from your beloved student!May you continue to inspire greatness in all of your students!
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．