【題目】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I'm Li Hua and I'm writing to apply for the assistant post you advertised on Internet.

It is stated in my resume, I graduated from Zhejiang University with outstanding academic performances. I have a good command of English, and which is an advantage when apply for a job like this. Among all the factor, cooperation is the most important strength of' a good assistant. I think I do good in the team work and I'm good at communicate with different people. Besides, I once get a part-time job in 2012 in Shandong Province and gained some precious work experience.

Since your company attaches important to employees' creativity, that's an honor for me to be one of your staff. I'm positive that I can be capable of this job if offered the chance. Thanks for your consideration.

【答案】

【1】Internet 前面加the

【2】It is stated 中的It 改成As

【3】去掉and 或which改成it

【4】apply 改為applying

【5】factor 改為factors

【6】do good in 中的good 改為well

【7】communicate 改為communicating

【8】get 改為got

【9】important 改為importance

【10】that’s 改為it’s

【解析】

【1】Internet 前面加the ，考查冠詞，在專有名詞之前需要使用冠詞the

【2】It is stated 中的It 改成As, 考查連詞, 這是一個由as引導(dǎo)的定語從句，意為正如。

【3】去掉and 或which改成it考查，考查連詞或代詞。如果是定語從句的不需要前面的and，如果不是定語從句，而是一個并列句的話呢，主語應(yīng)該是it.

【4】apply 改為applying考查非謂語形式，這是省略了主語的when +非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)。由于邏輯主語是我，與apply構(gòu)成主謂關(guān)系所以使用現(xiàn)在分詞applying。

【5】factor 改為factors 考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，根據(jù)前面的all可以知道答案要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【6】do good in 中的good 改為well 考查副詞，動詞do需要使用副詞well修飾 ，good是well的形容詞形式。

【7】communicate 改為communicating 根據(jù)前面的介詞at，知道需要使用動名詞形式

【8】get 改為got 根據(jù)句子后面是用來gained過去式，所以這里保持一致性也需要使用過去式。

【9】important 改為importance 考查名詞 attach importance to : 重視

【10】that’s 改為it’s 考查代詞 ，it被指代上文提到的內(nèi)容。It’s 是It is 的縮寫形式。

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