Question

【題目】一家英語報社向中學生征文，主題是“我理想的大學生活”，請根據(jù)下列要求和你的暢想完成短文。

l.專業(yè)與課程； 2.老師與同學； 3.學�；顒�。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.司以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream University

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Answer 1

【答案】

I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream university. As far as I can imagine, I’ll be admitted to Shandong University, where I’ ll major in English. I can choose a variety of courses, which will help me improve my spoken English and have a better understanding of foreign cultures.

The professors there will be friendly and knowledgeable, with whose help not only can I enrich my knowledge but also I can broaden my horizons. In addition, I’ll have lovely and caring classmates. We’ll compete in our study and be close friends in our daily life. In our free time, various activities will be held to build up our courage and experience, such as parties and competitions. I’m sure my college life will be rich and colorful.

【解析】

試題分析：注意條理要清晰，邏輯順序和結(jié)構(gòu)要恰當，同時要盡量保持簡潔精干的內(nèi)容，不拖泥帶水。要注意題中所給的信息，不可偏題，應用文寫作對于文章內(nèi)容的要求是要達到寫作目的。盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。

【亮點分析】第一段第一個句子是賓語從句I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream university. 我經(jīng)常想象在我夢想的大學里，我的生活會怎樣。第二句是一個where引導的非限制性定語從句As far as I can imagine, I’ll be admitted to Shandong University, where I’ ll major in English. 就我能想想象的，我將會考上山東大學的英語專業(yè)。第三句是一個which引導的非限制性定語從句I can choose a variety of courses, which will help me improve my spoken English and have a better understanding of foreign cultures.我可以選很多課，這將幫助我改進我的英語口語并且能更好的理解外國文化。第二段中第一句是whose引導的非限制性定語從句 The professors there will be friendly and knowledgeable, with whose help not only can I enrich my knowledge but also I can broaden my horizons.教授是友好、學識廣博，在他的幫助下我不僅可以增長知識，也能開闊視野。除此之外還使用了很多比較好的結(jié)構(gòu)和短語：admitte to允許進入…； not only… but also不僅…而且；In addition此外；compete in競爭…；build up建立； such as例如。

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