Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Sir,

I’m writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the host families for the British students.

Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, our large fully-equipped apartment meets all their needs. In addition the convenient public transportation, our own car can also bring them to

Some nearby places of interest. With fluency English, I’m sure I will have no difficulty communicate with them. Above all, we have hosted two British students last year, through it we have gained lots of experience. What’s more, my mother is a good cooker and can guarantee them a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food.

I would greatly appreciate you if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours’

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】the →a

【2】Locating →Located

【3】addition后加to

【4】bring →take

【5】fluency→fluent

【6】communicate →communicating

【7】去掉have

【8】it→which

【9】cooker→cook

【10】you→it

【解析】

【1】the →a 句意：一次有價值的機會。故把the →a。

【2】Locating →Located be located in坐落在---地方，此處是過去分詞作狀語，故把Locating →Located。

【3】addition后加to in addition 另外，此外；in addition to除---之外。故在addition后加to。

【4】bring →take 句意：我們的汽車也能帶他們?nèi)�。根�?jù)句意可知把bring →take。

【5】fluency→fluent 句意：用流利的英語。形容詞修飾名詞，故把fluency→fluent。

【6】communicate →communicating 固定句式：have no difficulty in doing sth.所以把communicate →communicating。

【7】去掉have 句意：去年我們曾寄宿過兩名英國學生。此處用一般過去時態(tài)，故去掉have。

【8】it→which 句意：通過這個我們已經(jīng)獲得了許多經(jīng)驗。前面整個句子是先行詞，介詞through后面用which引導非限制性定語從句，故把it→which。

【9】cooker→cook 句意：一名好的廚師。故把cooker→cook。

【10】you→it 固定句式：I would appreciate it if/when---，故把you→it。

【名師點撥】

1.in addition 另外，此外；besides另外，此外；what’s more另外，此外；furthermore/moreover另外，此外.

2.be located in坐落于---； be interested in 對---感興趣；be faced with 面臨著---；be equipped with 被---裝備；be lost in迷失在---； be addicted in 沉迷于---；be admitted into---讓---進入。注意：這樣的詞組在句子中作狀語、補足語、定語時，去掉前面的be動詞。