Question

假如你是申寧，根據(jù)下面的提示，給你的朋友王東發(fā)一電子郵件。
1.上個禮拜，我去公園玩，進大門后碰巧遇上幾位從美國來遂寧旅游的大學(xué)生。
2.你向他們打招呼并交談，然后帶著他們游覽公園。大家玩的很開心。出來的時候，在大門外你又幫他們買了些東西。
3.美國朋友向你表示了感謝，之后你們便分手了。
4.談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋?br />注意：
1.寫作應(yīng)包括以上文字涉及的各項內(nèi)容。
2.為使寫作流暢，在不影響主題表達(dá)完整準(zhǔn)確的前提下，允許必要的增減與發(fā)揮。
3.詞數(shù)80—100，開頭已給出

Answer 1

Hi, Wang Dong,
I went to the park last week. After entering the main gate, I came across some foreign visitors. I greeted them and we began talking in English .I got to know that they were college students from USA traveling in Suining.
I showed them around the park. We all had a wonderful time. When we came out of the gate, I helped them do some shopping. Then they thanked me and left. I felt very happy and proud that I could be of some help to others and talk with foreigners. And I also made some American friends.
Bye for now
Shen Ning

試題分析：考查提綱類作文的寫作。要求根據(jù)提示，寫一篇電子郵件，介紹自己在星期天，幫助幾個美國的大學(xué)生的事情，考點只需要翻譯即可，在談?wù)勛约旱母惺艿臅r候，要用自己的語言表述自己的觀點，稍有難度，在寫作的時候一定要使用合適的連接詞來連接全文，讓文章成為一個整體，同時要注意使用英語句型如I got to know that they were college students from USA traveling in Suining.這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做定語，還有這句話I felt very happy and proud that I could be of some help to others and talk with foreigners.be of some help運用的很恰當(dāng)。這些都是作文的亮點。
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，此類作文雖然好寫，但是要寫出特色是很不容易的。關(guān)鍵是要點要全面覆蓋，不能有遺漏和省略。寫作的時候運用多種表達(dá)方式，讓句子有變化。