Question

假如你叫李華，今年讀高中。在下午的班會課上同學(xué)們展開了一場討論，主題是高中學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉。請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給某英文報(bào)社寫一封信，介紹討論情況。

55%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	45%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為
每天應(yīng)該進(jìn)行適量的體育鍛煉，如做早操，打乒乓球、籃球	鍛煉浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，使人疲勞
鍛煉能增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)、減少生病的機(jī)會	運(yùn)動后很興奮，耽誤學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間
運(yùn)動能使大腦得到休息，學(xué)習(xí)效率更高	運(yùn)動時(shí)還有可能受傷

注意：詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether senior high school students should take physical exercise or not.                                                        
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
Best wishes.                                            
Yours,
Li Hua.

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether senior high school students should take physical exercise or not .There are too different opinions about it.55% of the students think they should take exercise every day, such as doing morning exercises, playing ping-pong and playing basketball, but should not take too much time. Taking exercise can build up one’s body and reduce disease. What’s more,Sports let their brains rest so that their revision will be more effective.
On the other hand, 45% believe taking exercise is a waste of time and tiring. After having sports, they are too excited for a long time to draw attention to their lessons. It’s likely to get hurt in sports.
Best wishes.                                            
Yours,
Li Hua.

試題分析：這是一篇正反方的議論文，首先要仔細(xì)審題確立主題明確要求.2.圍繞主題和要點(diǎn)編擬提綱.3.分析要點(diǎn)及提綱提煉關(guān)鍵單詞和短語4.恰當(dāng)使用句型連詞成句5.恰當(dāng)使用連接詞組句成篇，注意：寫作人稱為第三人稱和第一人稱。明確要點(diǎn)，確定核心詞、詞組、句型。不要忘了“你的看法”：語言使用注意：A.學(xué)會使用較高級詞匯。B.學(xué)會使用較豐富的句式。 C．學(xué)會使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】所給范文條理清晰，語言簡潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的短語和句子：build up 建立，增強(qiáng)，a waste of time浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，Sports let their brains rest so that their revision will be more effective. 這句話用了so that句型， After having sports, they are too excited for a long time to draw attention to their lessons.這句話用了too…to結(jié)構(gòu)和非謂語動詞， It’s likely to get hurt in sports. 這句話用了固定句型。還有范文使用了：What’s more,On the other hand,這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。