Question

如今很多中學(xué)生都紛紛開(kāi)起了自己的博客, 請(qǐng)對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要介紹，并發(fā)表自己的看法。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 參考調(diào)匯：開(kāi)博客open one’s blog
Nowadays, it’s not an uncommon phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet.
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Answer 1

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Nowadays, it’s not an uncommon phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet. For one thing, it can provide a platform to show their talent and release their pressure, thus making it more and more popular with high school students. On the contrary, many parents and teachers think that managing one’s blog takes a lot of time and energy.
Personally speaking, I approve of the former opinion. Opening and organizing an eye-catching blog needs various abilities such as writing, designing, being skillful at computer and so on. Only if we master those abilities can we make a successful blog. As a consequence, we improve ourselves during the procedures of organizing our blogs.
Anyway, the blog itself is of little harm. It is your attitude towards it that matters. We should take the advantages and avoid some bad effects.

試題分析: 本文要求對(duì)如今的中學(xué)生開(kāi)了自己的博客這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要介紹，并發(fā)表自己的看法。兩個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容要求。然后確定人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。 時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。 
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了For one thing表明了開(kāi)微博的好處，用On the contrary說(shuō)明了其缺點(diǎn)。Personally speaking,開(kāi)始表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。注意了開(kāi)頭用詞的變化。同時(shí)用了thus –ing表示順理成章的理由；還用動(dòng)詞的-ing做主語(yǔ)等；還運(yùn)用了Only加狀語(yǔ)的倒裝句結(jié)構(gòu)等較復(fù)雜的句式。并注意了句子句子之間的銜接如用As a consequence，Anyway等等。
考點(diǎn):提綱類(lèi)作文。