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14．今年暑假，一批來(lái)自國(guó)外的中學(xué)生將來(lái)中國(guó)參加在玉山一中舉行的數(shù)學(xué)奧林匹克賽，屆時(shí)，他們將吃、住在玉山．假設(shè)你是高二年級(jí)的學(xué)生李明，有意邀請(qǐng)一位學(xué)生在你家入住，現(xiàn)向?qū)W�？傌�(fù)責(zé)老師張老師寫(xiě)一封英文信，內(nèi)容如下：
1．介紹你本人及家庭情況；      2．陳述你申請(qǐng)的理由；      3．希望得到這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear sir，
I am Li Hua．I'm writing toapply for the chance to invite one of the competitors，Oliver，to stay at my home during the International Olympic Maths Competition to be held in Yushan No.1 Middle School．I am a student in Senior Grade two of our school．I can speak fluent English and I am outgoing，so I'm sure I will have no difficulty communicating with the student．We live in a three-room apartment located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood．My family meets all the needs of a foreign student who is coming to stay．My parents are kind and hospitable．We also have a private car，which makes it convenient for us to get around．More importantly，we hosted an exchange student from Germany last year，through which I and my parnents have gained lots of experience．I love western culture and want to learn more about it．I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance．I expect to make friends with him．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是李華給張老師寫(xiě)的一封英文信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一表明書(shū)信目的；二介紹本人和家庭情況以及申請(qǐng)的理由；三希望得到這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)．
高分句型：
1．I'm writing to apply for the chance to invite one of the competitors，Oliver，to stay at my home during the International Olympic Maths Competition to be held in Yushan No.1 Middle School．句子里apply for 表示"申請(qǐng)"； to be held in Yushan No.1 Middle School是the International Olympic Maths Competition 的定語(yǔ)，表示"即將在玉山一中舉行的"．
我寫(xiě)信來(lái)邀請(qǐng)來(lái)參加在玉山一中舉行的數(shù)學(xué)奧林匹克賽的一名參賽者，奧莉薇來(lái)我家居�。�
2．We also have a private car，which makes it convenient for us to get around．句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句We also have a private car．
我們也有一輛私人汽車(chē)，這就讓我們四處去很便利．

解答 Dear sir，
      I am Li Hua．I'm writing to apply for the chance to invite one of the competitors，Oliver，to stay at my home during the International Olympic Maths Competition to be held in Yushan No.1 Middle School．【高分句型一】（表明書(shū)信目的）I am a student in Senior Grade two of our school．I can speak fluent English and I am outgoing，so I'm sure I will have no difficulty communicating with the student．We live in a three-room apartment located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood．My family meets all the needs of a foreign student who is coming to stay．My parents are kind and hospitable．We also have a private car，which makes it convenient for us to get around．【高分句型二】More importantly，we hosted an exchange student from Germany last year，through which I and my parnents have gained lots of experience．I love western culture and want to learn more about it．I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance．I expect to make friends with him．（介紹本人和家庭情況以及申請(qǐng)的理由）
     Looking forward to your early reply．（希望得到這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)）
                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

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