Question

【題目】假設你是新華中學的李華，請你給來校訪函，請他參加你們學校舉行的英語詩書會活動包括：

1. 發(fā)出邀請；

2. 介紹詩書活動的相關信息（例如：

3. 說明邀請的原因并詢問對方的意向

注意：1. 詞數100左右。

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Mr. Li ,

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Li,

I hope everything goes on well with you. I’m writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school. We’ll feel greatly honored if you are present.

The activity is scheduled at 8:00am this Friday in the auditorium. Aiming to improve the students’ understanding of the beauty of English literature, the reading circle will serve as a platform for students to communicate with each other face to face, sharing their own reading experience together.

As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading, we sincerely hope that you can come and join us.

Would you be kind enough to spare some time for us? Thank you in advance. Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，要求假設你是新華中學的李華，寫一封邀請函。要注意邀請函的格式和特殊用詞。未來的事情，用一般將來時來寫。要點：1. 發(fā)出邀請；2. 介紹詩書活動的相關信息。3. 說明邀請的原因并詢問對方的意向。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達要點全面，結構緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如: invite sb. to do sth. 邀請某人做某事，face to face面對面。還使用了賓語從句I hope everything goes on well with you.等多種句式結構，增加了文章的可讀性。