Question

【題目】假如你是李華,最近你所在的城市設立了“漢字書寫日”。你的美國筆友John對此很感興趣，寫信向你詢問。請根據(jù)以下要點給他回一封信。內(nèi)容包括:

(1)設立原因：人們提筆忘字，寫漢字機會減少;

(2)日期：9月28日，孔子誕辰;

(3)活動：書法競賽及展覽等。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；(開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))

2.可適當添加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：漢字 character，孔子 Confucius，書法 calligraphy

Dear John,

How is everything going?

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

How is everything going? I am writing to tell you something about Chinese Character Writing Day in our city.

With the popularity of mobile phones, computers and the Internet, many people have few opportunities to write in daily life. Consequently, people tend to forget how to write Chinese characters when they have to. Therefore, a special day is needed to arouse people's interest in Chinese characters and encourage people to write them more often. Moreover, it is a good way to keep our traditional culture alive.

Now September 28th is chosen as Chinese Character Writing Day, for it is the birthday of Confucius. Various activities will be held that day, such as handwriting contests and exhibitions of calligraphy, through which people can enjoy the beauty of the Chinese character and experience a culture of amazing depth and variety as well.

You are welcome to join us.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封書信，假如你是李華,最近你所在的城市設立了“漢字書寫日”。你的美國筆友John對此很感興趣，寫信向你詢問。請根據(jù)以下要點給他回一封信。時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：popularity普及，opportunities機會，daily life日常生活，Consequently因此，tend to傾向于，arouse引起，encourage sb. to do sth.鼓勵某人做某事，traditional culture傳統(tǒng)文化，Various各種各樣的。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

亮點說明：作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如：Various activities will be held that day, such as handwriting contests and exhibitions of calligraphy, through which people can enjoy the beauty of the Chinese character and experience a culture of amazing depth and variety as well.

定語從句的運用；Moreover, it is a good way to keep our traditional culture alive.不定式是形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式結構。本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉換自然，為文章增色添彩。