Question

【題目】假定你是李華，近日你校將舉行三蘇文化節(jié)系列活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)給你的留學(xué)生朋友Jack寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 活動(dòng)時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)；

2. 活動(dòng)目的及內(nèi)容。

注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：三蘇文化節(jié) Three Sus Culture Festival 書法 calligraphy

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

To honor three great literary figures in Chinese history, our school is to hold Three Sus Culture Festival. Since you’re fascinated by Chinese culture and literature, I’m writing to invite you to join.

The festival is scheduled for July 16 to 18, when various activities will be arranged in our school hall and playground. With the aim to help us better understand. Three Sus culture and thus develop a deeper love for our hometown, the festival will include plays based on Three Sus’ life stories, exhibition of their calligraphy and lectures on their poetry.

I do believe this is a good opportunity for you to explore more of Chinese culture. I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給留學(xué)生朋友Jack寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加三蘇文化節(jié)系列活動(dòng)。

第一步: 審題

體裁: 應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu): 總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：

1.活動(dòng)時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)；

2. 活動(dòng)目的及內(nèi)容。

第二步: 列提綱 (重點(diǎn)詞組)

aim to；invite to；base on；a good opportunity for

第三步: 連詞成句

To honor three great literary figures in Chinese history, our school is to hold Three Sus Culture Festival.

Since you’re fascinated by Chinese culture and literature, I’m writing to invite you to join.

The festival is scheduled for July 16 to 18, when various activities will be arranged in our school hall and playground.

Three Sus culture and thus develop a deeper love for our hometown, the festival will include plays based on Three Sus’ life stories, exhibition of their calligraphy and lectures on their poetry.

I do believe this is a good opportunity for you to explore more of Chinese culture.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步: 連句成篇 (銜接詞)

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(從句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步: 潤(rùn)色修改