Question

2．假設(shè)你是李華，你所在的學校與美國BASIS Tucson中學有一個交流項目（Exchange Program），此項目為部分同學提供在美國學習一年的機會．現(xiàn)在你有意要參加該項目，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點，用英語向該校寫一份申請．
1．渴望了解不同文化，樂于傳播中國文化；
2．現(xiàn)正在寄宿學校（boarding school）上學，習慣離家生活；
3．新的經(jīng)歷對性格培養(yǎng)有益，是學習、鍛煉的好機會．
注意：
1．短文必須包括以上要點，可適當添加細節(jié)．
2．詞數(shù)：100詞左右．開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Sir or Madam，
How is everything with you？
I′m so glad to hear that there is an opportunity to study in America．Therefore，I′m writing this letter to apply to take part in the exchange program．I think I must be the best choice for you due to my following advantages over others．（高分句型一）
First，I′m interested in different cultures and am willing to make Chinese culture known to more people．Furthermore，because I am studying in a boarding school now，I have been used to living away from my home and there is no doubt that I can take care of myself．（高分句型二）Above all，new experiences are beneficial to developing good characters．（高分句型三）So it is supposed to be a good chance to learn and improve myself．
Hope to hear from you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息 假設(shè)你是李華，你所在的學校與美國BASIS Tucson中學有一個交流項目（Exchange Program），此項目為部分同學提供在美國學習一年的機會．現(xiàn)在你有意要參加該項目，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點，用英語向該校寫一份申請，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：渴望了解不同文化，樂于傳播中國文化；現(xiàn)正在寄宿學校（boarding school）上學，習慣離家生活；新的經(jīng)歷對性格培養(yǎng)有益，是學習、鍛煉的好機會．
2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：Therefore因此；apply to 申請；take part in 參加；Furthermore而且；be used to習慣于；there is no doubt that毫無疑問；Above all最重要的是；hear from受到某人的信息；
I think I must be the best choice for you due to my following advantages over others．（高分句型一）
Furthermore，because I am studying in a boarding school now，I have been used to living away from my home and there is no doubt that I can take care of myself．（高分句型二）
Above all，new experiences are beneficial to developing good characters．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       How is everything with you？
       I′m so glad to hear that there is an opportunity to study in America．Therefore，I′m writing this letter to apply to take part in the exchange program．I think I must be the best choice for you due to my following advantages over others．（高分句型一）
       First，I′m interested in different cultures and am willing to make Chinese culture known to more people．Furthermore，because I am studying in a boarding school now，I have been used to living away from my home and there is no doubt that I can take care of myself．（高分句型二）Above all，new experiences are beneficial to developing good characters．（高分句型三）So it is supposed to be a good chance to learn and improve myself．
       Hope to hear from you soon．
                                                                                                                                             
Yours，
                                                                    Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．