Question

假設(shè)你是李華，加拿大一所學(xué)校將于今年暑假組織學(xué)生來(lái)你校訪(fǎng)問(wèn)。其間，Andy Smith將借住你家。請(qǐng)你代表全家寫(xiě)信給Andy，歡迎他的到來(lái)，并告知有關(guān)事宜。信的要點(diǎn)如下：

　　1.上午：學(xué)�；顒�(dòng)2.下午：游覽市區(qū)3. 晚上：看電視，玩游戲，聊天

　　注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫3. 參考詞匯：安排arrange

Answer 1

Dear Andy,

　　I’m so glad that you’ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday. I’m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.

　　In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged. You’ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on. We’ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.

　　In the afternoon, you can tour around the city. And I’ll act as your tour guide. Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look. You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.

　　At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we’re interested in. I’m sure you’ll enjoy yourself. I’m looking forward to your coming.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li hua

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