現(xiàn)在學(xué)生的視力下降是較為普遍的現(xiàn)象，請(qǐng)以“How to Protect Eyesight”為題寫一篇100字左右的短文，要求內(nèi)容如下：

分析視力下降的原因：如看書時(shí)間過長(zhǎng)，在弱光下讀書，經(jīng)常使用電腦等。

提出至少兩條保護(hù)視力的建議。

可以適當(dāng)?shù)脑黾觾?nèi)容，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

How to Protect Eyesight

Nowadays many students wear glasses because they are short-sighted. It is a common phenomenon that more and more students` eyesights are declining.

 

 

 

 

 

One possible version：

How to Protect Eyesight

Nowadays many students wear glasses because they are short-sighted. It is a common phenomenon that more and more students` eyesights are declining.

In my view, eyes are windows of our hearts. Therefore, it is a problem that we must pay much attention to. First, reading too long time can do harm to our eyesight. We`d better have a break and have a look at the distance after half an hour`s reading. Besides, I suggest we not study in the weak light and not keep our eyes close to the books. What is more, some students are addicted to playing computers ,which is also quite harmful. The eye exercises are good ways to relax our eyes. If possible, we are supposed to get more sleep so that our eyes can get more rest.

Why not take actions to protect our eyes and see a bright and clear world? Come on.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求以“How to Protect Eyesight”為題寫一篇100字左右的短文。寫作時(shí)要包括以下兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)：一 分析視力下降的原因：如看書時(shí)間過長(zhǎng)，在弱光下讀書，經(jīng)常使用電腦等。二 提出至少兩條保護(hù)視力的建議。在寫作時(shí)根據(jù)字?jǐn)?shù)需要可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，但是要圍繞文章中心進(jìn)行拓展發(fā)揮，不要偏離主題。為了增強(qiáng)行文的邏輯性和結(jié)構(gòu)的緊湊，需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，比如on the one hand , on the other hand , besides , what ‘s more 等等。因?yàn)槭欠治錾鐣?huì)現(xiàn)象，所以應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。此外，為了增加采分點(diǎn)還應(yīng)該注意高級(jí)詞匯和句式的使用。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇范文采用了三段式結(jié)構(gòu)，這種段落安排使文章條理清晰，層次分明。開始段提出學(xué)生們視力下降這一現(xiàn)象。第二段作者發(fā)表自己的看法，也就是分析造成這種現(xiàn)狀的原因。第三段呼吁人們要行動(dòng)起來(lái)，保護(hù)視力。作者在文中對(duì)連接副詞和短語(yǔ)的準(zhǔn)確使用也是本文的一大亮點(diǎn)，文中In my view, Therefore, First，Besides, What is more,等詞匯的出現(xiàn)不僅使句子與句子之間過度自然，而且也使文章語(yǔ)言更加流暢，語(yǔ)義也更為連貫。最后作者使用一問一答的方式增強(qiáng)了文章的感染力。

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