Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序。用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文向�？�“英語(yǔ)園地”投稿，記述你和同學(xué)們上周組織“向白色污染說(shuō)不”主題活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于 60。

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Answer 1

【答案】Last week, together with my classmates, I organized a meaningful activity with the theme “Say No to White Pollution”.

One evening, while I was reading a newspaper, a piece of news on white pollution caught my eye. The seriousness of this issue left me wondering what I should do as a citizen of the earth.

During a class break the next day, I shared the news with some of my classmates. We all agreed that something must be done to make a change, no matter how trivial it might seem. After a thorough discussion, we set our plan for a 2-day campaign and made some necessary preparations.

Last weekend, our plan became reality. At the front gate of Hongxing Community, we promoted the idea of environmental protection. Meanwhile, we gave out eco-friendly bags to passers-by, hoping that the bags could serve as a daily reminder of the green life we advocated. Impressed with our efforts, they all promised to do as best as they could to avoid white pollution.

Before the activity came to an end, I was interviewed by BTV, which meant I could make our message heard by a much larger crowd of people. What a pleasant surprise! While introducing what we had done, I couldn’t help but to picture the day when this issue was finally solved with every individual’s effort. The earth will surely be a better place then.

【解析】

第一步：審題

體裁：記敘文（圖畫類作文）

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

要求：1.根據(jù)圖片先后順序展開(kāi)。

2.為保護(hù)環(huán)境，做了哪些事情。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

together with; a meaningful activity;catch my eye;shared... with...; make a change;made some necessary preparations; meanwhile; serve as; promise to do; came to an end; a much larger crowd of people

第三步：連詞成句

1.Last week, together with my classmates, I organized a meaningful activity with the theme “Say No to White Pollution”.

2. One evening, while I was reading a newspaper, a piece of news on white pollution caught my eye.

3. During a class break the next day, I shared the news with some of my classmates.

4. We all agreed that something must be done to make a change, no matter how trivial it might seem.

5. We set our plan for a 2-day campaign and made some necessary preparations.

6. Meanwhile, we gave out eco-friendly bags to passers-by, hoping that the bags could serve as a daily reminder of the green life we advocated.

7.Before the activity came to an end, I was interviewed by BTV, which meant I could make our message heard by a much larger crowd of people.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：潤(rùn)色修改

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。