Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你班交換生 Jim 因“新冠肺炎”的爆發(fā)無法返校，來信向你咨詢相關(guān)事宜，請你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 本學(xué)期開學(xué)日期推遲，全體學(xué)生不得入校；

2. 學(xué)校提供在線網(wǎng)課，停課不停學(xué)；

3. 在家規(guī)律運(yùn)動(dòng)，勤洗手，保持身體健康；

4. 如有調(diào)整，及時(shí)通知。

參考詞匯：爆發(fā)：outbreak新冠肺炎：novel coronavirus

要求：正文部分不得少于 80 字，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

Dear Jim，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

It's a pity that you can't return to school because of the outbreak of the novel coronavirus. I'm now writing to tell you more about it.

At present, prevention and control of the virus is the top concern. The opening date of this term has to be delayed. All of the students are not allowed to go to school. To ensure the quality of learning, online education will be provided during the absence from school. By the way, it wouldn't be better if you could work out regularly at home and keep healthy by washing your hands carefully.

If there is any adjustment, I'll keep you informed ahead of time. Wish you good luck!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求以李華的身份給交換生Jim寫一封回信。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文。

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。

要求：

1. 本學(xué)期開學(xué)日期推遲，全體學(xué)生不得入校；

2. 學(xué)校提供在線網(wǎng)課，停課不停學(xué)；

3. 在家規(guī)律運(yùn)動(dòng)，勤洗手，保持身體健康；

4. 如有調(diào)整，及時(shí)通知。

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)短語）

the outbreak of the novel coronavirus；prevention and control；online education

第三步：連詞成句

1.It's a pity that you can't return to school because of the outbreak of the novel coronavirus.

2.At present, prevention and control of the virus is the top concern.

3.To ensure the quality of learning, online education will be provided during the absence from school.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇

1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：提出無法返校原因；上課及防疫方法；表示祝福

2.表示并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：because of；At present；By the way；and

第五步：潤色修改