Question

12．假如你是李華，請根據(jù)以下提示，給你的外教Huson寫一封信，邀請他作為演講比賽的評委，并請他在賽后給參賽學(xué)生指導(dǎo)如何演講．
NOTICE
English Speech Contest
Theme：opportunities often come disguised as hard work
Time：16：30～18：00，28^th August
Place：the Academic Hall
注意：
1、詞數(shù)100左右：
2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫：
3、開頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封邀請信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時態(tài)以一般將來時表示比賽安排為主．內(nèi)容包括：一點明書信目的；二比賽的主題，時間和地點；三對方在比賽的工作；四表示感激．
高分句型：
1．It will be held from 16：30 to 18：00 on 28^th August in Academic Hall，where you often give us lectures．句子里where引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，先行詞是Academic Hall．
比賽將會在八月二十八日的下午四點半到六點在學(xué)術(shù)大廳舉行，那是你經(jīng)常做演講的地方．
2．Since your lectures have been gaining great popularity among students，I'm fully convinced that your presence as a judge will surely make both the participants and audience happy．句子里Since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示"因為"；have been gaining 是現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時；I'm fully convinced 表示"我完全相信"．
因為你的演講一直受到學(xué)生的歡迎，所以我完全相信，你作為裁判出現(xiàn)肯定會讓參賽者和觀眾高興．

解答 Dear Huson，
I'm writing to sincerely invite you to take part in the coming English Speech Contest in our school next week as a judge．（點明書信目的）
The contest，with the theme of"opportunities often come disguised as hard work"this year，is an annual activity of our school．It will be held from 16：30 to 18：00 on 28^th August in Academic Hall，where you often give us lectures．【高分句型一】（比賽的主題，時間和地點）Since your lectures have been gaining great popularity among students，I'm fully convinced that your presence as a judge will surely make both the participants and audience happy．【高分句型二】By the way，I also hope you can spare some time to instruct the participants how to deliver a successful speech．（對方在比賽的工作）
I'd really appreciate it if you can accept my invitation．I'm looking forward to your reply．（表示感激）
Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文一般給出的要點比較多，這就要求我們在寫作時不用遺漏任何的要點，無論是漢語的提示還是英文的，同時如果題目要求要有自己的發(fā)揮，那么也要有所體現(xiàn)．這些要點是閱卷老師的關(guān)注重點．