Question

Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
1、生活中困難不可避免，面對困難需要信心…
2、試舉一例說明信心在學習（考試、生活等）方面的作用…
3、你對困難的態(tài)度…

Answer 1

One possible version：
It is well-known that we are in the world with various difficulties. Faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence .With confidence, we can find the problem is not as “huge” as we imagine. Take myself as an example. Once in an exam, it was said that the exam would be difficult, and I was at first a little nervous. When the exam began, I built up my confidence and persuaded myself that I was capable of figuring out all the problems. What was unexpected was that I got the highest scores in the class！
From my experience, I draw a conclusion that we can make it as long as we have confidence in whatever we do.With confidence, we will overcome all the difficulty. Nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!

試題分析：本篇書面表達要求談論面對困難時所需的信心，首先要根據(jù)提示信息確定要點，本文要點有三方面，首先講明信心的重要性、然后舉例、最后提出自己的觀點。其次在遣詞造句上要將有效信息和發(fā)揮想象的內(nèi)容，增添的細節(jié)等用靈活的句式表達出來，比如賓語從句、定語從句和各種短語等。 此外還要巧妙地運用一些過渡詞或短語來連接成文，使行文連貫、語言流暢。
【亮點說明】本文開篇提出自信的重要性，然后舉例說明，最后講述自己的觀點，并且與文章開頭相呼應。這種結構安排使文章脈絡清晰，結構緊湊，也表現(xiàn)了作者清晰的思路。文中句式較為豐富，比如主語從句It is well-known that we are in the world with various difficulties.狀語從句When the exam began,賓語從句we can find the problem is not as “huge” as we imagine同位語從句I draw a conclusion that we can make it as long as we have confidence表語從句What was unexpected was that I got the highest scores in the class！等。此外高級詞匯be capable of 和figuring out的出現(xiàn)也是文章的一個亮點。