Question

【題目】假如你叫李華，是一名高中學(xué)生。你的網(wǎng)友Alice是一位美國的學(xué)生，近期她要寫一篇有關(guān)中國的小論文。請(qǐng)你給她寫一封e-mail,介紹中國的情況。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1.中國位于亞洲東部，有著悠久歷史，有許多的名勝古跡;

2.中國有了長(zhǎng)足的發(fā)展，同時(shí)國家一直在采取措施，努力去保護(hù)環(huán)境;

3.大部分人已經(jīng)擺脫貧窮，大多數(shù)孩子能夠接受教育。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100詞左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Alice,

I am glad to give you some information about China.

China is located in eastern Asia. It is a country with a long history, splendid culture and ancient civilization and has an extremely rich historical and cultural heritage. China has developed fast in the past years, and meanwhile China has taken a lot of measures to try to protect the environment. Nowadays, China has gotten rid of poverty and most of the children are receiving good education. China has a lot of places of historical interest that people can visit. Chinese people are very kind and friendly. I hope you can visit China during the holiday.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封電子郵件，介紹中國的情況。這是一篇提綱式作文。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來。寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一篇提綱式作文，內(nèi)容齊全，語言精練，同時(shí)使用高級(jí)句子。China is located in eastern Asia.被動(dòng)語態(tài)用在句中；China has developed fast in the past years句中使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)；China has a lot of places of historical interest that people can visit.定語從句的運(yùn)用恰到好處；I hope you can visit China during the holiday.省略ｔｈａｔ的賓語從句。