Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Peter給你發(fā)郵件，表示想了解有關(guān)中國諺語(Chinese proverbs)的知識及其學(xué)習(xí)方法。請你給他回封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 中國諺語的由來(人們的智慧和經(jīng)驗，口頭傳承)；

2. 中國諺語的特點(簡短而富有意義)

3. 實用的學(xué)習(xí)方法。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am delighted to have received your email. Knowing that want to learn about Chinese proverbs and their learning methods. I am writing to tell you something about them.

As part of the traditional Chinese culture. Chinese proverbs are summaries of people’s wisdom and experience. They are some brief and meaningful sentences created by people and are passed on orally generation by generation. As for the practical ways to learn Chinese proverbs, I suggest that you find some relevant materials online, which may give you specific explanations. Additionally, it is beneficial to recite the proverbs every day, and you can apply them to communicating with Chinese people around you.

I sincerely hope the above can be of some help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，向外國朋友介紹有關(guān)中國諺語的知識和學(xué)習(xí)方法。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 表明郵件意圖

2. 介紹中國諺語

1）中國諺語的由來

2）中國諺語的特點

3. 介紹學(xué)習(xí)方法

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

Chinese proverbs；learn about；learning method；traditional Chinese culture；wisdom and experience；pass on；orally；meaningful

第三步：連詞成句

1. Glad to know you want to learn about Chinese proverbs.

2. Let me make an introduction of it and its learning method.

3. Chinese proverbs are summaries of people’s wisdom and experience and they are part of traditional Chinese culture.

4. Chinese proverbs are brief but meaningful generally.

5. They are passed on orally generation by generation.

6. If you are looking for the practical ways to learn Chinese proverbs, I’d recommend you find some information on the Internet.

7. Hope these things that I say can help.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改