Question

【題目】請根據(jù)下列提示要點，以“The Ways to Keep Healthy” 為題，寫一篇短文。

提示：

1. 人人都想保持健康。

2．飲食要健康：多吃水果、蔬菜，因為它們富含纖維素和維生素；少吃黃油(butter)、奶酪(cheese)、咖啡和巧克力，因為它們含糖和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪使你迅速變胖。

3．有良好的生活習慣：定期鍛煉，充足的睡眠，不要過度勞累，不抽煙等等。

要求：

1. 短文須包括上述所有要點，可以適當增加細節(jié),使短文連貫。

2．詞數(shù)約100左右。

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Everyone hopes to be in good health. But how? Here are some ways to keep healthy.

First, you need a healthy diet. It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins. Don’t eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat, like butter, cheese, coffee and chocolate. Fat and sugar make people put on weight easily.

Second, good living habits are very important. You should do regular exercise to build up your body. Besides, enough rest is necessary for your health. You need 8 hours’ sleep a night and don’t work too hard. Smoking is a bad habit, so never smoke.

In a word, healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于說明文，根據(jù)題目要求和提示信息說明保持健康的方法和途徑。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、嚴格按照題目要求，不遺漏要點，將文章分層次，簡明扼要的陳述觀點；3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如，本文采用三段式，層次更清晰，語義更明確，容易理解；使用了First, Second,Besides,In a word,等連詞，使文章層次清晰，語言連貫；Don’t eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat, like butter, cheese, coffee and chocolate.是which引導的定語從句；It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins. 是because引導的原因狀語從句；so never smoke.使用了so it do表示“...也是”。