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2．如今旅游成為了人們放松休閑的一種方式，但是同時出現(xiàn)了一些不文明的行為，比如亂涂亂畫，亂扔垃圾等．請你就這種不文明現(xiàn)象寫一篇發(fā)言稿．內(nèi)容應包括：
1．游客的一些不文明的行為；
2．樹立良好形象，從我做起；
3．增強環(huán)保意識，制止不文明行為．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文流暢．
參考詞匯：不文明行為uncivilized behavior   刻畫 scratch
How Can We Behave Well in School？
Recently there exists some uncivilized behavior in our school．Some students spit in public．Other students like to play on the grass，regardless of the warning．What makes me ashamed is that some students show no respect for their teachers even in class．
All the above behavior is of no good to build a friendly and harmonious school．There is no doubt that it is to blame．As we know，every effort，however small，will make a difference．
The school is out home．We should form good habit and raise the awareness of civilized behavior．For example，we can put the waste paper in the dustbin，wait in the queue in the dinning room，and try to be honest in the exams．When we do something wrong，we must be brave to admit what we have done and correct it in time．Let's take action from now on．．

Answer 1

分析 （高級句型一）What makes me ashamed is that some students show no respect for their teachers even in class．
該句型使用了what makes me引導的主語從句，意思是使我羞愧的是…；that引導一個表語從句；
（高級句型二）When we do something wrong，we must be brave to admit what we have done and correct it in time．
首先when引導時間狀語從句；admit后what引導一個賓語從句，意思是我們要勇敢承認我所做的…‘
高級詞匯：be of no good 固定句型，沒有好處；harmonious和諧的；raise the awareness 增強…的 意識；make a difference有意義；take action 采取行動；

解答 How Can We Behave Well in School？
      （列舉不文明現(xiàn)象）Recently there exists some uncivilized behavior in our school．Some students spit in public．Other students like to play on the grass，regardless of the warning．（高級句型一）What makes me ashamed is that some students show no respect for their teachers even in class．
    All the above behavior is of no good to build a friendly and harmonious school．There is no doubt that it is to blame．As we know，every effort，however small，will make a difference．
     （給出適當建議）The school is out home．We should form good habit and raise the awareness of civilized behavior．For example，we can put the waste paper in the dustbin，wait in the queue in the dinning room，and try to be honest in the exams．（高級句型二）When we do something wrong，we must be brave to admit what we have done and correct it in time．Let's take action from now on．

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