分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息你即將畢業(yè)離校,將開啟大學求學之路的序幕.回首高中三年求學路,相信你一定有許多話要說.假如你能有幸回到高一,再來重新過一輪高中生活,你會怎樣規(guī)劃你的3年高中生涯?寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:詳細闡述你的規(guī)劃; 你的理由及對學弟學妹們的建議.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:make a plan做計劃;Therefore,因此;reasonably合理地; First of all首先; Secondly其次;stay up late 熬夜; In a word總之;in advance提前;
As is well-known to us all,our High school will give us very much free time.(高分句型一)
If not,I'll give myself a little punishment,such as playing less computer games on the weekend.S(高分句型二)
In a word,we should summarize what we have learned.(高分句型三)
解答 If I were lucky enough to restart my senior high school life,I would make a plan for my coming life.As is well-known to us all,our High school will give us very much free time.(高分句型一) We need to use our time reasonably.Therefore,I need to make a learning plan.
First of all,I make a plan every day,and follow it strictly.Before going to sleep at night,I will check whether it is completed.If not,I'll give myself a little punishment,such as playing less computer games on the weekend.S(高分句型二)econdly,I′ll prepare myself well for the second day after finishing my homework.I will sleep early every day,because staying up late will affect learning efficiency in class.
In a word,we should summarize what we have learned.(高分句型三)I think if you make a plan in advance you will completely enjoy your new high school life.
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