Question

【題目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

最近一本在線雜志發(fā)表了一篇文章，文中詢問，在公眾眼中，什么樣的人是適合做年輕人的榜樣（role model）。請你寫封信給該雜志，推薦一位你認為適合做榜樣的名人（celebrity）。你的文章須包括：

簡單介紹這位名人；

為何這位名人適合做年輕人的榜樣。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam.

I have read your magazine's article asking what kind of person is suitable to be a role model for young people. In my opinion, the role model for young people should be a person of our own age, who is not only positive and sunny, but also has made outstanding achievements.

In my mind, Wang Yuan, the leader of TFboys is such a person. Since his debut, he has brought us a lot of wonderful songs. His greatest achievement is that as a representative of Chinese youth, he was invited to attend the ECOSOC Youth Forum 2017 held at the UN headquarters in New York and delivered a speech in English. He is not only the first Chinese artist invited to participate in the UN youth forum, but also the first Chinese youth idol on the UN stage.

In view of the reasons above, I think Wang Yuan is a good role model for us.

yours truly,

Lihua

【解析】

本篇書面表達是應用文，要求寫一封書信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求寫一封書信：最近一本在線雜志發(fā)表了一篇文章，文中詢問，在公眾眼中，什么樣的人是適合做年輕人的榜樣，請你寫封信給該雜志，推薦一位你認為適合做榜樣的名人。你的文章須包括：簡單介紹這位名人；為何這位名人適合做年輕人的榜樣。時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如； role model（榜樣），celebrity（名人），sunny（陽光的），positive（積極的）， outstanding（杰出的），achievement（成就），debut（出道）及youth idol（青年偶像）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。