【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有l(wèi)0處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第1l處起)不計(jì)分。

My grandparents live in the countryside．They keep a dog calling Ah Bao．One day my grandparents go to work in the fields，taking along my little brother and Ah Bao．My brother and Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself. My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river．Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into a water．Hearing about him barking，my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother .Ah Bao did all he could save my little brother,that moved all the people present．Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness．

【答案】

【1】calling改成called

【2】go改成went

【3】himself改成 themselves

【4】while 改成when

【5】immediate改成 immediately

【6】a改成the

【7】about去掉

【8】could后加to

【9】that改為which

【10】brave改為bravery

【解析】

試題分析：我的爺爺奶奶住在鄉(xiāng)下，他們養(yǎng)了一條狗叫阿寶。一天，爺爺奶奶帶著我的弟弟和阿寶一起去田間，弟弟不慎落入河中，阿寶救了我的弟弟。每個(gè)人都贊揚(yáng)阿寶的勇敢和善良。

【1】calling改成called�？疾靹�(dòng)詞。主語和從句的主語一直是，可以將從句中的主語和謂語的一部分，尤其是助動(dòng)詞be省略掉，這里省略了which is.

【2】go改成went�？疾靹�(dòng)詞。故事發(fā)生在過去，采用一般過去時(shí)。

【3】himself改成 themselves�？疾旆瓷泶~。主語為我的弟弟和阿寶，他們倆玩得很開心。

【4】while 改成when�？疾靪hen和while的辨析。When即指時(shí)間點(diǎn)，也指時(shí)間段。While只指時(shí)間段。When引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句中的動(dòng)詞可以使終止性動(dòng)詞，也可是延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞，而while從句必須是延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞。

【5】immediate改成 immediately�？疾旄痹~。副詞immediately修飾動(dòng)詞jump。

【6】a改成the�？疾旃谠~辨析。a為不定冠詞，表泛指。 the為定冠詞，表特指。River為上文中提到過的，故為特指。

【7】about去掉�？疾靹�(dòng)詞。hear about后接sth.，聽到關(guān)于某事的消息。

【8】could后加to。考察不定式。To do 表示目的，阿寶做了所有他能做的去拯救我的弟弟。

【9】that改為which�？疾爝B詞。Which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。

【10】brave改為bravery�？疾靊rave的名詞形式。Brave的名詞形式為bravery。

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