Question

【題目】隨著老齡化問(wèn)題的日趨嚴(yán)重，空巢老人越來(lái)越多，很多老人呆在家里無(wú)所事事，感到空虛寂寞。請(qǐng)你向“China Daily”報(bào)社專欄寫一封關(guān)于讓這些老年人歡度老年時(shí)光的建議信。

注意： 1、空巢老人的現(xiàn)象； 空巢老人(empty nester)

2、提建議及建議的理由；（至少兩條建議）

3、開(kāi)頭與結(jié)束已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。詞數(shù)120左右；

4、不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Dear editor,

Sincerely yours,

Wan Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor，

As the aging population is becoming larger and larger, the problem of the empty nesters is getting more and more serious. Many of them doing nothing at home, feeling lonely and empty.

I think they had better join in some outdoor activities，such as climbing mountains，playing Taiji. These activities can not only keep them physically healthy, but also make them happy and active. It is also a good idea for the old people to make some friends with the people of their age. They can keep each other in company and share their experiences and happiness. Having friends means that they can have someone to talk to so that you won't feel lonely and depressed.

In my opinion, these suggestions may be helpful to them. I hope all the empty nesters will have a happy old life in future.

Wang Min

【解析】

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的建議信。建議信主要是向?qū)Ψ教岢鼋ㄗh，以便對(duì)方接受自己的建議，從而解決相關(guān)問(wèn)題。一般分三段：第一段開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山讓收信人明白寫信人要提的建議是關(guān)于什么，一般用概括性句子說(shuō)明建議；第二段說(shuō)明建議的具體內(nèi)容和理由，注意條理清晰；第三段則希望對(duì)方接納自己的建議或希望自己的建議對(duì)對(duì)方有幫助。本文主要是就空巢老人提出自己的建議。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章條理清晰，第一段直指主題；第二段說(shuō)明建議內(nèi)容和理由；最后一段希望自己的建議對(duì)對(duì)方有幫助。文章使用了多種表達(dá)方式和短語(yǔ)，如：not only…but also…、of their age、keep each other in company、share their experiences and happiness等等。