9．假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)∧，并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線\劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：
1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者從第11處不計(jì)分．
One day when I was about to playing football，I saw Mother was taking a lot of dirty clothes to wash or a bucket to carry water．I thought Mother was very tiring，so I decided to help her wash the clothes．While I was doing the washing，Li Ming came and asked me to play football with himself．I refused him and told him that I will help Mother finish the houseworks first．When I got the housework done，I was very exhausted that I was sweating all over．
When Mother came back to home，she found I had washed all the dirty clothes．She gladly said that I was good child．I felt very happily．

分析 本文主要講述作者幫母親做家務(wù)的事情．當(dāng)作者幫母親洗衣服時(shí)，李明來要作者和他一起踢足球，他都拒絕了．當(dāng)母親回家時(shí)，發(fā)現(xiàn)作者洗了所有的臟衣服，很是高興．

解答 One day when I was about to playing football，I saw Mother was taking a lot of dirty clothes to wash or a bucket to carry water．I thought Mother was very tiring，so I decided to help her wash the clothes．While I was doing the washing，Li Ming came and asked me to play football with himself．I refused him and told him that I will help Mother finish the houseworks first．When I got the housework done，I was very exhausted that I was sweating all over．
When Mother came back to home，she found I had washed all the dirty clothes．She gladly said that I was∧good child．I felt very happily．
詳解：
1．playing改為play 考查詞語用法．be about to do sth．意為"剛要做某事，即將做某事"，是固定搭配．
2．or改為and 考查連詞．a(chǎn) lot of dirty clothes to wash和a bucket to carry water是并列結(jié)構(gòu)，用連詞and．
3．tiring改為tired 考查過去分詞．過去分詞作表語，多半用來表示人物所處的心理狀態(tài)或情感變化，其主語多半是人．
4．himself改為him 考查代詞．根據(jù)句意：李明來要我和他一起踢足球．用代詞him．
5．will改為would 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．全文講述的是過去的事情，要用過去將來時(shí)態(tài)．
6．houseworks改為housework 考查名詞．housework是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式．
7．very改為so 考查固定句型．so…that…意為"如此/這么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副詞，常常用來修飾形容詞或副詞，常用句型為：主語+謂語+so+adj．/adv．+that從句．
8．去掉to 考查詞語用法．home是副詞，其前不需要介詞to．
9．加a 考查冠詞．child是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式前加不定冠詞a表示泛指．
10．happily改為happy 考查形容詞．feel是連系動(dòng)詞，后接形容詞作表語．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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