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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Dear Sir/Madam,

POP CLUB attract me deeply. I'm Tom, coming from American and studying Chinese literature now. I like music very much. I have a good voice, that I feel very proud of. And I am good at play the guitar. In addition, I have great sense of team spirit. I think I am the one you want to.

I would appreciate it if I could be accept. I can show my talent, improve my speaking Chinese and make many Chinese friend there. Moreover, I will try my better to make contributions to the club. If you think I'm suitable, please inform me by writing to tom 101@hotmail. com. Thank you for your consideration.

【答案】第一句：attract改成attracts

第二句：American改成America

第四句：that改成which

第五句：play改成playing

第六句：great前加a

第七句：去掉to

第八句：accept改成accepted

第九句：speaking改成spoken

第九句：friend改成friends

第十句：better改成best

【解析】本文是一封申請信，Tom想加入POP CLUB。

第一處：考查時態(tài)。表示主語現在的狀態(tài)，用一般現在時，且主語POP CLUB是第三人稱單數，所以謂語動詞用單數，第一句：attract改成attracts。

第二處：考查名詞。句意：我叫湯姆，來自美國。表示“美國”，所以第二句：American改成America。

第三處：that I feel very proud of.在此作定語修飾voice，所以是一個非限制性定語從句，關系詞在從句中作proud of的賓語，that不能引導非限制性定語從句，所以第四句：that改成which。

第四處：考查固定用法。be good at + doing，表示擅長做某事，是固定用法，所以第五句：play改成playing。

第五處：考查固定短語。我有一種極好的團隊精神。a sense of一種……的感覺，是固定短語，所以第六句：great前加a。

第六處：考查動詞。want表示“想要”時，是及物動詞，后面直接接賓語，所以第七句：去掉to。

第七處：考查語態(tài)�！拔摇焙汀敖邮堋敝g是被動關系，用被動語態(tài)，所以第八句：accept改成accepted。

第八處：考查固定用法。我可以展示我的才能，提高我的漢語口語。表示“口語”，所以第九句：speaking改成spoken。

第九處：考查固定短語。make friends交朋友，是固定用法，所以friend改成friends。

第十處：考查固定短語。try one’s best to do sth.盡某人最大的努力做某事，是固定用法，所以第十句：better改成best。

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