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12．假設你叫李華，你所在的學校的美國交流生 David 邀請你周末跟他朋友一起去露營．但是你 舅舅一家周末要來你們家，所以你不能前往，請你給 David 寫封道歉信．
注意：
1．詞數(shù) 100 左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫的；
3．開頭語已為你寫好． 
Dear David，
How are you？Thank you for your invitation to go hiking and camping with your friends this weekend．Unfortunately，it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family，because my uncle is visiting us this weekend．（高分句型一）I haven't seen my cousin for a long time so I think I'd better stay at home and show my cousin around．（高分句型二）
I feel terribly sorry for missing such a happy get-together，and I hope that all of you have a good time．With my sincere apology and thanks for your generosity．Please send my regards to your friends．（高分句型三）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息 假設你叫李華，你所在的學校的美國交流生 David 邀請你周末跟他朋友一起去露營．但是你 舅舅一家周末要來你們家，所以你不能前往，請你給 David 寫封道歉信．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：go hiking 去遠足；Unfortunately不幸的是；have a good time玩的愉快；feel sorry for因為…而抱歉；
Unfortunately，it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family，because my uncle is visiting us this weekend．（高分句型一）
I haven't seen my cousin for a long time so I think I'd better stay at home and show my cousin around．（高分句型二）
With my sincere apology and thanks for your generosity．Please send my regards to your friends．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear David，
       How are you？Thank you for your invitation to go hiking and camping with your friends this weekend．Unfortunately，it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family，because my uncle is visiting us this weekend．（高分句型一）I haven't seen my cousin for a long time so I think I'd better stay at home and show my cousin around．（高分句型二）
       I feel terribly sorry for missing such a happy get-together，and I hope that all of you have a good time．With my sincere apology and thanks for your generosity．Please send my regards to your friends．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．