Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假段定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有

10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處

加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

1． 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.

I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

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Answer 1

【答案】

【1】holding---hold

【2】passes----passed

【3】much--- well/clearly

【4】shoulder—shoulders

【5】toward---to/into

【6】himself---him

【7】he前加and

【8】去掉fact前的a

【9】during---when

【10】never---ever

【解析】第一處：句意：我?guī)缀醪挥浀梦业淖婺�。她過(guò)去常常抱著我跪在地上，唱老歌�？疾楣潭ù钆洌�used to do sth意為“過(guò)去常常做某事”，故將holding改為hold。

第二處：句意：我只有四歲時(shí)，她去世了。外婆去世這件事發(fā)生在過(guò)去，所以應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)，故將passes改為passed。

第三處：句意：我非常深的記得我的祖父。remember只能被well/clearly修飾，表達(dá)“記得很深/好”，故將much改為well。

第四處：句意：他個(gè)子很高，肩膀?qū)掗�。根�?jù)常理，人有兩個(gè)肩膀，肩膀應(yīng)該是復(fù)數(shù)，所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將shoulder改為shoulders。

第五處：句子a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.句意為“祖父有多年來(lái)從黑色變成了灰色的胡子”，由over the years以前主句中用的過(guò)去時(shí)可知，應(yīng)該用過(guò)去完成時(shí)had done，故在此處加上had。

第六處：句意：他的深沉的聲音把他和別人區(qū)別開來(lái)。所以應(yīng)該用賓格him。故將himself改為him。

第七處：根據(jù)句中結(jié)構(gòu)可知He had a deep voice…和he was strong and powerful是并列關(guān)系，故用and連接。

第八處：固定短語(yǔ)in fact表示“實(shí)際上”，故刪去a。

第九處：during為介詞，后不能接句子；應(yīng)用when這個(gè)連詞引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。故將during改為when。

第十處：語(yǔ)義錯(cuò)誤。句意：他是我認(rèn)識(shí)的最溫柔的人。故將never改為ever。