【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中

共有 10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線（___），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Tom,

How are you recent? Now I want to tell you something about my English teacher Mr. Li. He is a forty-years-old handsome man. He has a happy family. He’s outgoing and gets along good with us. Her classes are very interesting. After class, he often helps us on our English. He never smokes. He like sports and he is especially good at playing the chess.

Most my classmates like him and think what he’s not only a good teacher but also a good friend.

I was looking forward to your reply.

【答案】

【1】recent改為recently

【2】forty-years-old改為forty-year-old

【3】good改為well

【4】Her改為His

【5】on改為with

【6】like 改為likes

【7】the chess去掉the

【8】Most后加of

【9】what改為that或者去掉that

【10】was 改為am

【解析】

【1】recent改為recently；第一句中recent為形容詞，不能單獨(dú)放在句末充當(dāng)句子成分，應(yīng)改為副詞形式，故將recent改為recently。

【2】forty-years-old改為forty-year-old；格式不正確，要么是forty years old，要么是forty-year-old，故將forty-years-old改為forty-year-old。

【3】good改為well；第五句中g(shù)et along為動(dòng)詞短語，good作為一個(gè)形容詞不能修飾動(dòng)詞短語，故將good改為well。

【4】Her改為His；Mr.,Li. 是一個(gè)男性，故將her改為His。

【5】on改為with；搭配錯(cuò)誤，help sb.with.sth.是在某方面幫助某人，故將on 改為with。

【6】like 改為likes；第九句中He是第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用單數(shù)形式，故將like改為likes。

【7】the chess去掉the；play chess是固定短語，表示下象棋，故將中間的the去掉。

【8】Most后加of；most+ of +可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)是一種常見的搭配，故將第二段中most后加of。

【9】what改為that或者去掉that；第二段中‘he’s not only a good teacher but also a good friend.’充當(dāng)think的賓語，賓語從句中不缺少任務(wù)成分，只能將what改為that，that可以省略。

【10】was 改為am；.最后一段時(shí)態(tài)不對(duì)，文章是書信的文體，通常采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，而全文也是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故將was改為am。

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