Question

15．假如你是李華，你遠(yuǎn)在美國工作的叔叔想要回國發(fā)展，來信向你詢問家鄉(xiāng)的情況．請你給他寫一封回信，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．家鄉(xiāng)的變化（街道、綠化、建筑）；
2．存在的問題（環(huán)境、交通）；
3．希望他為家鄉(xiāng)做貢獻(xiàn)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：做貢獻(xiàn)make contributions to
Dear uncle，
I'm glad to hear that you will come back to our homeland for development．I think it's a great idea to build our hometown．
Great changes have taken place in our hometown over the last few years．The streets and roads which used to be narrow are wider and cleaner now and there are trees and flowers growing along the sidewalks．More and more tall buildings are being built．However，during the course of creating a more modern city，some problems appear，such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours．Our city government has realized these problems and has taken measures to solve them．I think everyone should do something to make our country more beautiful．
I hope you will make great contributions to our hometown after you come back．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是寫給在美國工作的叔叔的一封信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)（包括一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)）．內(nèi)容包括：一肯定對方回國發(fā)展的想法；二家鄉(xiāng)的變化以及存在的問題；三希望他為家鄉(xiāng)做貢獻(xiàn)．
高分句型：
1．The streets and roads which used to be narrow are wider and cleaner now and there are trees and flowers growing along the sidewalks．句子里which 引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞The streets and roads；used to 表示"曾經(jīng)"；are wider and cleaner now 是主句的系動詞和表語； growing along the sidewalks是名詞trees and flowers 的定語．
曾經(jīng)狹窄的街道現(xiàn)在又干凈又寬闊，沿著人行道有綠樹和鮮花．
2．Our city government has realized these problems and has taken measures to solve them．句子里 realized these problems 表示"意識到這些問題"； has taken measures to 表示"采取措施做某事"．
我們的市政府已經(jīng)意識到這些問題，并且已經(jīng)采取措施來解決這些問題．

解答 Dear uncle，
   I'm glad to hear that you will come back to our homeland for development．I think it's a great idea to build our hometown．（肯定對方回國發(fā)展的想法）
   Great changes have taken place in our hometown over the last few years．The streets and roads which used to be narrow are wider and cleaner now and there are trees and flowers growing along the sidewalks．【高分句型一】More and more tall buildings are being built．However，during the course of creating a more modern city，some problems appear，such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours．Our city government has realized these problems and has taken measures to solve them．【高分句型二】I think everyone should do something to make our country more beautiful（家鄉(xiāng)的變化以及存在的問題）．
    I hope you will make great contributions to our hometown after you come back．（希望他為家鄉(xiāng)做貢獻(xiàn)）
                                                                                                                        Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

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