Question

10．高三學(xué)子要經(jīng)歷各種各樣的考試，在考試中難免會遇到失利，這給同學(xué)們造成了很大的困擾．最近，你們在英語課上就考試失利這個問題展開了討論，請陳述討論的結(jié)果，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下
1．考試失利的好處（兩點(diǎn)）
2．考試失利的弊端（兩點(diǎn)）
3．你應(yīng)對考試失利的做法．

注意：
1．短文必須包括所列內(nèi)容；
2．詞數(shù)120左右；
3．文章標(biāo)題和開頭已給出．
Failure in exams
As we all know，Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to avoid failures sometimes，which greatly upset them．Recently，As we all know，Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to aviod failures sometimes，which greatly upset them．（高分句型一） Recently，our class had a heated discussion about failure in exams．（提出論點(diǎn)）Here are the results．
We all agree that there are bothe advantages and disadvantages of failing in the exam．Generally speaking，it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows．To begin with，it reminds students to devote themselves more to their studies．In addition，it helps students realize in what aspect they are weak in，thus leading them to improve．
However，some disadvantages may arise from failure in exams．Firstly，it ruins students'self-confidence so badly that some of them even no longer study hard．And secondly，teachers and parents show their dissatifaction with these students，which makes the matter worse．（分析原因）
Faced with failure in exams，what I usually do is to turn to my teachers for help．（高分句型二）They will always analyze my problems and give me some advice on how to deal with them．Their comfort and encouragement means so much to me．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
As we all know，Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to aviod failures sometimes，which greatly upset them．眾所周知，高三的學(xué)生會經(jīng)歷各種考試并且有時很難避免失敗，這一點(diǎn)會使得他們心煩意亂．
高分句型二：
Faced with failure in exams，what I usually do is to turn to my teachers for help．面對考試中的失敗，我常做的事就是向老師尋求幫助．
句型一 ①As we all know，該句是一個由as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，as在句中替代后面整個句子的內(nèi)容
            ②which greatly upset them 該句是一個由which作先行詞，在句中作主語，且替代前面整個主句內(nèi)容的非限制性定語從句，此處不可以用that

解答 As we all know，Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to aviod failures sometimes，which greatly upset them．（高分句型一） Recently，our class had a heated discussion about failure in exams．（提出論點(diǎn)）Here are the results．
  We all agree that there are bothe advantages and disadvantages of failing in the exam．Generally speaking，it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows．To begin with，it reminds students to devote themselves more to their studies．In addition，it helps students realize in what aspect they are weak in，thus leading them to improve．
  However，some disadvantages may arise from failure in exams．Firstly，it ruins students'self-confidence so badly that some of them even no longer study hard．And secondly，teachers and parents show their dissatifaction with these students，which makes the matter worse．（分析原因）
  Faced with failure in exams，what I usually do is to turn to my teachers for help．（高分句型二）They will always analyze my problems and give me some advice on how to deal with them．Their comfort and encouragement means so much to me．

點(diǎn)評 該書面表達(dá)給出了一個觀點(diǎn)，要求考生根據(jù)觀點(diǎn)給出相應(yīng)合理的對其的理解，最后再結(jié)合自身情況給出總結(jié)性觀點(diǎn)．寫作時應(yīng)注意邏輯清晰，盡量將自己贊成的觀點(diǎn)闡述清楚．