Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

There was a time when my sister was very sad. She used to be a happy girl but was one of the top student in her class. But she lost her left leg in an accident when she is in high school. She was taken hospital and stayed for a long time. Feel very sad, she shut her in her room and refused to communicate with others. All of us were worried about her. One day she learned about a girl whom didn’t lose heart though she lost her leg in an earthquake. My sister was deep moved. She had decided to forget the terrible experience and face her life bravely. Now she is living the happy life.

Answer 1

【答案】1.a happy girl but -----and

2.student-----students

3.she is in ----- she was in

4.hospital 前加to

5.Feel-----Feeling

6.shut her----- shut herself

7.whom-----who

8.deep-----deeply

9.had decided 去掉had

10.the happy life -----a happy life

【解析】1.句意：她曾經(jīng)是個(gè)快樂的女孩，并且是班上最優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生之一。此處表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，故把a happy girl but -----and。

2. one of+名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故把student-----students。

3.句意：她高中時(shí)在一次事故中失去了左腿。句子用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故把she is in ----- she was in。

4.句意：她被帶到醫(yī)院。take sb. to---,把某人帶到---，故在hospital 前加to。

5.句意：她感到很傷心，她把自己關(guān)在房間里，不與其他人交流。此處feel和she之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，現(xiàn)在分詞做原因狀語，故把Feel-----Feeling。

6. 句意：她感到很傷心，她把自己關(guān)在房間里，不與其他人交流。根據(jù)句意可知把shut her----- shut herself.

7.此處a girl是先行詞，指人，后面的定語從句缺少主語，故把whom-----who。

8.句意：我的妹妹深深地被打動(dòng)。故把deep-----deeply深深地。

9.句意：他決定忘記可怕的經(jīng)歷，勇敢地面對(duì)人生。此處在講過去發(fā)生的一件事，并沒有和過去的動(dòng)作或過去的時(shí)間相比較，應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故had decided 去掉had。

10.句意：現(xiàn)在她正過著一個(gè)幸福的生活。故把the happy life -----a happy life。