【題目】假如你是佳木斯第一中學(xué)高二學(xué)年的學(xué)生李華，在網(wǎng)上看到了本市兒童福利院招募志愿者的廣告，要求周日工作半天，工作內(nèi)容包括看護(hù)幼童，教小學(xué)生文化課等等。你非常感興趣，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封應(yīng)征信，寫(xiě)明自己想?yún)⒓拥囊庠�、原因、個(gè)人能力等。

要求：

1.100詞左右；可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.參考詞匯：兒童福利院Children Welfare House

3.開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Madame or Sir,

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Yours

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Madame or Sir,

I am writing in response to the position as a volunteer advertised on the Internet,and I hope I can have the opportunity to be admitted.

I'm a second grader from Jiamusi No.1 High School,hardworking and outgoing.Not heavily burdened by schoolwork,I can guarantee the working time on Sundays.Since I was very young,I have been very interested in teaching,especially teaching small kids.Besides studying with them,having fun with them is a great pleasure for me.I have done similar work before so I think I can handle it very easily.I am confident that your children will love me.

It will be appreciated if I can volunteer in Welfare House.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作。高二學(xué)年的學(xué)生李華，在網(wǎng)上看到了本市兒童福利院招募志愿者的廣告，要求周日工作半天，工作內(nèi)容包括看護(hù)幼童，教小學(xué)生文化課等等。寫(xiě)作的要點(diǎn)主要有：簡(jiǎn)單自我介紹，寫(xiě)明自己想?yún)⒓拥囊庠浮⒃�、個(gè)人能力等。寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全，語(yǔ)句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。

【本文亮點(diǎn)】

本篇范文很好地進(jìn)行了語(yǔ)篇設(shè)計(jì)，全文分成幾段顯得很有條理；各要點(diǎn)的敘述井井有條，層次分明。文章開(kāi)頭點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)信意圖，言簡(jiǎn)意賅。第二段為重點(diǎn)展開(kāi)要點(diǎn)的段落。作者在文章中多次使用了復(fù)合句和非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式作狀語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、主語(yǔ)等，如Not heavily burdened by...., Since I was very young,....；Besides studying .... having fun with them…等；同時(shí)句中的高級(jí)詞匯和句型使用合理，如guarantee，It will be appreciated if I…等；語(yǔ)言地道，沒(méi)有堆砌辭藻，沒(méi)有出現(xiàn)中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句型。另外文章中的連接詞運(yùn)用較好，如第二段中Besides, especially等等。

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