Question

假設(shè)你是李華，上個星期天在動物園游覽時看到有人傷害動物園里的動物。請你根據(jù)下面提供的信息，寫信給English Learners’ Lighthouse 的編輯，反映事實并發(fā)表看法。

提示:

1. 當(dāng)時的情景：有人向動物投擲小石頭或燃著的煙頭，有人給動物喂不合適的食物等, 以此取樂；

2. 看法：看到動物受到故意傷害，深表震驚; 動物是人類的朋友，有自己的生存權(quán)利；應(yīng)采取措施保護等。

注意: 1. 短文應(yīng)包括所有要點, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

2. 詞數(shù)120個左右; 開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you ______________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours Sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about an incident of animals being hurt by some people that happened in the zoo last Sunday.

I was watching the lovely monkeys playing in the zoo that day when I noticed someone threw small stones to the monkeys. Some gave burning cigarette ends to the monkeys and got them burnt. Others were feeding animals with food and fruits that are not fit for the animals. They did this just for their own pleasure.

I was shocked. Animals are our friends. They have their own right to live. It is our duty to protect them. Something must be done to prevent them from being hurt.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這篇書面表達是一篇話題作文。假設(shè)你是李華，上個星期天在動物園游覽時看到有人傷害動物園里的動物。請你根據(jù)下面提供的信息，寫信給English Learners’ Lighthouse 的編輯，反映事實并發(fā)表看法。提示已經(jīng)給出。要求我們把內(nèi)容翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)，使上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。一定要提出自己的建議。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯、短語和高級句型為文章潤色，避免全寫成簡單句。注意書信的格式；注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)在120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點說明】I was watching the lovely monkeys playing in the zoo that day when I noticed someone threw small stones to the monkeys.句中包含了一個時間狀語從句；Some…others…固定搭配；I hear that many animals, even some rare ones, are being hurt by some people on purpose.句中包含了一個賓語從句和現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)；Something must be done to prevent them from being hurt.句中用了高級詞組prevent…from…和動名詞被動式。

考點：書信類話題作文