Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧), 并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改： 在錯的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起) 不計分。

A tourist bus wound its way into a mountain area. On the way, two passengers—a couple of young lovers—were very attracted by the beautiful scenery that they called on a stop to get off the bus. They were left behind and the bus went on. Suddenly, they heard a loud boom ahead of the road. There was a huge rock rolled down a hill that hit the bus and fell with it into a deep valley. The lovers were greatly shocked by the news that no passengers on board were survived. When they calmed down they sighed and expressed their feelings in a few words.

The above story was told by a women guide when we were riding a tourist bus to scenic mountain. She asked us to guess that the lovers said immediately after the disaster that they had narrow escaped.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】mountain→mountainous

【2】very→so

【3】on→for

【4】There→It

【5】rolled→rolling

【6】把were survived中的were去掉

【7】women→woman

【8】在scenic mountain前加a

【9】that→what

【10】narrow→narrowly

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】mountain→mountainous 句意：多山的地區(qū)。形容詞修飾名詞，故把mountain改為mountainous。

【2】very→so so...that...如此……以至于……，引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句，故把very改為so。

【3】on→for 句意：要求下車。call for要求，需要，故把on改為for。

【4】There→It 句意：是一塊從山上滾落的巖石擊中了公共汽車。此句是強調(diào)句式，故把There改為It。

【5】rolled-→rolling 現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語，表示“正在滾動的”。故把rolled改為rolling。

【6】把were survived中的were去掉 在此句中survive（幸存）是不及物動詞，無被動語態(tài)，故把were survived中的were去掉。

【7】women→woman 前面有冠詞a，故判斷名詞應(yīng)該用單數(shù)，故把women改為woman。

【8】在scenic mountain前加a 句意：一座風(fēng)景優(yōu)美的山。故在scenic mountain前加a。

【9】that→what 句意：她要求我們猜那對愛人說了什么。此處是what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，what在從句中作賓語，表示“什么”，故把that改為what。

【10】narrow→narrowly 副詞修飾動詞，故把narrow改為narrowly。

【知識拓展】

1.a narrow escape九死一生；a narrow vicotry幸勝；a narrow defeat惜敗。

2.不及物動詞無被動語態(tài)

happen/break out/come about/occur/take place發(fā)生；disappear消失；appea出現(xiàn)。The story happened in 2016.這故事發(fā)生在2016年。