Question

19．假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Liz最近對中國古錢幣產(chǎn)生了興趣，想請你介紹一種中國的古幣．請你根據(jù)以下寫作要點(diǎn)為她介紹唐朝開元通寶．
詞數(shù)：100左右 （開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．

適用朝代	唐朝
形狀	圓形方孔
材質(zhì)	銅
歷史意義	開元通寶見證了唐朝經(jīng)濟(jì)的繁榮與發(fā)展．開元通寶的使用結(jié)束了延綿七百余年的五銖，是唐代以后各代銅錢的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)；在錢幣發(fā)展史上占有重要地位．

參考詞匯：開元通寶：Kai Yuan Tong Bao coin   方形：square  銅：bronze
五銖：Wuzhu coin
注意：1．詞數(shù)100詞左右，不包括已給出內(nèi)容．
     2．可根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容進(jìn)行合理拓展．
Dear Liz，
                                                            
Yours，
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表+提綱作文，內(nèi)容是介紹唐朝開元通寶．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1．仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點(diǎn)就是主要內(nèi)容． 2．提供是文章的主要框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析，構(gòu)思和想象，要依據(jù)提示，按照一定邏輯來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照提示的三個(gè)方面來寫（ 時(shí)間   地點(diǎn)  活動安排）．3．根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)
  亮點(diǎn)說明  本文利用時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、事件的先后順序使文章層次分明、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、語言連貫，同時(shí)使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，比如定語從句The Kai Yuan Tong Bao coin is a round coin with a square hole at the centre of it，which was made of bronze and widely used in the Tang Dynasty．And not only did it witness the economic development of the Tang Dynasty，but the use of Kai Yuan Tong Bao coin totally put an end to the Wuzhu coin，which had been used for over 700 hundred years before that．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Liz，
     I'm so happy to hear that you are interested in ancient Chinese coins．I'm writing this letter to tell you something about a very ancient coin-----Kai Yuan Tong Bao coin．
    The Kai Yuan Tong Bao coin is a round coin with a square hole at the centre of it，which was made of bronze and widely used in the Tang Dynasty．（高分句型）And not only did it witness the economic development of the Tang Dynasty，but the use of Kai Yuan Tong Bao coin totally put an end to the Wuzhu coin，which had been used for over 700 hundred years before that．（高分句型）More importantly，it became the standard of other coins after the Tang Dynasty and it played a very significant role in the history of coin development．（高分句型）
    I hope this will help you learn a little more about ancient Chinese coins．
Yours，
Lihu

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．