4.假如你是李華,最近你班同學(xué)就中學(xué)生是否可以帶手機(jī)上學(xué)進(jìn)行了討論.請你根據(jù)下列信息,給校長寫一封信,客觀地介紹你班討論的情況.
70%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為30%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為
1.沒有必要帶手機(jī);
2.帶手機(jī)會分散學(xué)習(xí)精力,上課開機(jī)影響極壞;
3.學(xué)生用手機(jī)會增加家長經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān).
1.學(xué)生可以帶手機(jī)上學(xué),但上課要關(guān)機(jī);
2.學(xué)生帶手機(jī)可以方便聯(lián)系;
3.信息時(shí)代的交流工具,不應(yīng)禁止.
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100字左右
2.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù).
家長經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān):parents'economic burden  信息時(shí)代 information times
禁止  ban…from…關(guān)機(jī) turn phones off
Dear principal,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether a mobile phone should be brought to school.                                                   

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)要求給校長寫一封信匯報(bào)班級就"中學(xué)生是否可以帶手機(jī)"進(jìn)行的討論結(jié)果.所以文章在開頭首先要講明寫信的目的.其次,在介紹學(xué)生們的觀點(diǎn)看法時(shí)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);文章要求客觀地介紹討論結(jié)果,所以文中要避免出現(xiàn)表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度的詞.此外,在陳述要點(diǎn)時(shí)要加入適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞以使語句通順,內(nèi)容連貫,結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊.
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章要點(diǎn)全面,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,開頭表明寫信的目的,然后分別介紹了兩種不同的觀點(diǎn).文中插入語To tell you the truth和Furthermore、Besides、However等表示遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折意義副詞的使用使文章上下文銜接自然,緊湊,而且文中原因狀語從句.Because with them we may not fix our attention to thelessons、條件狀語從句If the phone is no t turned off by chance;on condition that we turned off them in class、賓語從句thatwe shouldn't bring mobile phones to school的使用也顯示了作者對語言的熟練運(yùn)用能力.此外With a mobile phone等短語也避免了句式的單一.總之,這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文

解答 Dear principle,
    I am writing to tell you about the discussion we haveabout whether a mobile phone should be brought to school.
    To tell you the truth,the students in ourclass have different opinions.(高分句型)About 70% of the students think that we shouldn't bring mobile phones to school.Because with them we may not fix our attentionto the lessons.If the phone is no t turned off by chance and the ringing will destroy the class.(高分句型)Furthermore,using mobile phones will add to ourparents'economic burdens.However,about 30%of the students think we canbring phones to school on condition that we turned off them in class.(高分句型)With amobile phone it is convenient for us to keep in touch with our parents and friends.(高分句型)Besides,the mobile phone is a tool ofinformation times.It may not be right to ban students from carrying mobilephones.
                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours sincerely
                                                                                                                                                                                            LiHua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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