假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文. 文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

There are too many cars in our town now. For a result, there are lots of traffic jams, and the air which we will breathe is terrible. Our town is very old but all the streets are quite narrow, so there is no room for bus lanes, which mean that buses always get stuck in the traffic jams, too. However, lots of accidents with cyclists often happen because of crowded street. But I think there is a simple solution of these problems. The government should close city center to all traffic except buses and bikes, and build very larger car parks outside the town. Car drivers can take a bus into the city center and arrive at work or the shops relaxing and in a good mood.

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Planning a September trip to France

September is one of the very best months to visit France.Not only will you enjoy plenty of sunshine and warm weather, but the tourist season is beginning to wind down—which means cheaper airfares, lower prices at hotels, and fewer crowds.1.

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The temperatures are slightly lower,but plenty of sunshine makes for perfect conditions to enjoy a barge cruise on the canals of France.With such comfortable weather and beautiful scenery at this time of year, nothing equals hanging out on the deck of a barge.

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The survey about childhood in the Third World shows that the struggle for survival is long and hard . But in the rich world , children can from a different kind of poverty—of the spirit . , one Western country alone now sees 14,000 attempted suicides(自殺)every year by children under 15 , and one child five needs psychiatric(心理)advice .

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These children may grow up with a less oppressive sense of space and time than the children . Their sense of days and time has a lot to do with the change of seasons and positions of the sun or the moon in the sky . Children in the rich world , , are provided with a watch as one of the signs of growing up , so that they can along with their parents about being late for school times , meal times , bed times , the times of TV shows …

Third World children do not usually to stay indoors , still less in high-rise apartments . Instead of dangerous roads , “ keep off the grass ” signs and “ don’t speak to strangers ” , there is often a sense of to study and play . Parents can see their children outside rather than observe them from ten floors up .

, twelve million children under five still die every year through hunger and disease . But childhood in the Third World is not all .

1.A. come B. learn C. suffer D. survive

2.A. As usual B. For instance C. In fact D. In other words

3. A. by B. in C. to D. under

4.A. childhood B. poverty C. spirit D. survival

5. A. adults B. fathers C. neighbors D. relatives

6.A. Anyhow B. However C. Instead D. Still

7.A. away B. alone C. along D. nearby

8.A. growing up B. living through C. playing D. working

9.A. activity B. life C. study D. work

10. A. by B. from C. through D. with

11.A. and B. but C. or D. so

12.A. Eastern B. good C. poor D. Western

13.A. at any moment B. at the same time C. on the other hand D. on the whole

14.A. easiest B. earliest C. happiest D. quickest

15. A. care B. fear C. hurry D. worry

16.A. dare B. expect C. have D. require

17.A. control B. danger C. disappointment D. freedom

18.A. anxiously B. eagerly C. impatiently D. proudly

19. A. Above all B. In the end C. Of course D. What’s more

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A farmer, Mr. Tan, said that the storm began early 5. the morning and lasted for over an hour.

“I 6. (eat) with my wife and children,” he said, “when we heard a loud noise. A few minutes later our house fell down on top of us. We tried our best to climb out but then I saw that one of my children was 7. (miss). I was worried to death. 8. it was dangerous, I went back inside and found him safe.”

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