Question

10．你校英文報(bào)正在策劃一期以環(huán)保為主題的�？�．假如你是該報(bào)編輯李明，請(qǐng)給大家寫一封倡議書，要點(diǎn)如下：1．步行或騎車上學(xué)；2．及時(shí)關(guān)水龍頭、關(guān)燈；3．不亂扔垃圾．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear students，
I'm writing this letter to call on everybody to participate in protecting the environment．（高分句型一）Here are my suggestions．
Walking or riding a bike is a green means of going to school．Upon leaving a classroom，make sure the lights are switched off．After washing your hands，do remember to turn off the tap．（高分句型二）Moreover，try to put the garbage in the right place for recycling．
I hope everyone can start with little things，which will eventually make a difference．（高分句型三）
Yours
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你校英文報(bào)正在策劃一期以環(huán)保為主題的專刊．假如你是該報(bào)編輯李明，請(qǐng)給大家寫一封倡議書．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：步行或騎車上學(xué)；及時(shí)關(guān)水龍頭、關(guān)燈；不亂扔垃圾． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：call on呼吁，號(hào)召；participate in參加；make sure 確保；turn off關(guān)閉；Moreover而且；make a difference有意義，有影響；
I'm writing this letter to call on everybody to participate in protecting the environment．（高分句型一）
After washing your hands，do remember to turn off the tap．（高分句型二）
 I hope everyone can start with little things，which will eventually make a difference．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear students，
      I'm writing this letter to call on everybody to participate in protecting the environment．（高分句型一）Here are my suggestions．
      Walking or riding a bike is a green means of going to school．Upon leaving a classroom，make sure the lights are switched off．After washing your hands，do remember to turn off the tap．（高分句型二）Moreover，try to put the garbage in the right place for recycling．
      I hope everyone can start with little things，which will eventually make a difference．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                              Li Ming

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．