18．假設(shè)你是李華，暑假將至，你的外國(guó)朋友Alice發(fā)來(lái)郵件請(qǐng)你推薦旅游目的地，請(qǐng)給她回復(fù)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．景點(diǎn)位置、地位
2．當(dāng)?shù)靥厣ㄗ匀蝗宋摹⒚朗�、交通等�?br />3．相關(guān)提示
注意：1．文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫．
3．詞數(shù)100詞左右．
Dear Alice，
Hearing that you will spend the summer vacation touring in China，I'm more than glad to offer my recommendation．
As for my favorite touring place，I will never hesitate to recommend Sichuan，which is located in the southwest of China．（高分句型一）
Sichuan enjoys a good reputation of"Land of Abundance"for its breathtaking natural scenery，rich historical and cultural heritage as well as mouth-watering spicy food．（高分句型二）Also，it is home to ancient poets，artists，and political leaders known to the world．Chengdu，its capital，is a slow-paced and modern city in possession of large hotels and shopping centers．With convenient traffic network，you can travel to anywhere throughout the province．
By the way，weather can be hot and changeable in summer，so it is sensible to check it before setting out．（高分句型三）I believe you will have an unforgettable trip．
Yours sincerely，
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分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是李華，暑假將至，你的外國(guó)朋友Alice發(fā)來(lái)郵件請(qǐng)你推薦旅游目的地，請(qǐng)給她回復(fù)一封郵件．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：景點(diǎn)位置、地位；當(dāng)?shù)靥厣ㄗ匀蝗宋�、美食、交通等）；相關(guān)提示 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：more than 非常；As for 至于，關(guān)于；is located in 坐落于；as well as也，和；By the way順便說一下；
As for my favorite touring place，I will never hesitate to recommend Sichuan，which is located in the southwest of China．（高分句型一）
Sichuan enjoys a good reputation of"Land of Abundance"for its breathtaking natural scenery，rich historical and cultural heritage as well as mouth-watering spicy food．（高分句型二）
By the way，weather can be hot and changeable in summer，so it is sensible to check it before setting out．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Alice，
       Hearing that you will spend the summer vacation touring in China，I'm more than glad to offer my recommendation．
       As for my favorite touring place，I will never hesitate to recommend Sichuan，which is located in the southwest of China．（高分句型一）
Sichuan enjoys a good reputation of"Land of Abundance"for its breathtaking natural scenery，rich historical and cultural heritage as well as mouth-watering spicy food．（高分句型二）Also，it is home to ancient poets，artists，and political leaders known to the world．Chengdu，its capital，is a slow-paced and modern city in possession of large hotels and shopping centers．With convenient traffic network，you can travel to anywhere throughout the province．
       By the way，weather can be hot and changeable in summer，so it is sensible to check it before setting out．（高分句型三）I believe you will have an unforgettable trip．
                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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A．Being present can make a big difference．
B．A friend in need is a friend indeed．
C．The family harmony is the happiest thing in life．
D．Being a volunteer can make one's life more significant．

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