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10．假如你是李華．校英文報(bào)Growing pains欄目專(zhuān)門(mén)解答中學(xué)生的煩惱問(wèn)題．現(xiàn)欄目收到一封來(lái)信．請(qǐng)根據(jù)這封信的內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一封回信．
Dear Editor，
I am really angry with my parents recently．Next Sunday is my birthday．My parents promised to buy a cell phone for me as my birthday present this year．But now when I ask about the birthday present they say they have changed their ideas，because they worry about my study if I get a new cell phone since the final exam is coming soon．They say a cell phone may take up too much of my time．I believe I am old enough to control myself，but they don't believe me．What's more，they broke their promise!
Li Yan
內(nèi)容要求：
1．理解父母良苦用心；
2．手機(jī)有利有弊；
3．給出你的建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好．
Dear Li Yan，
It's normal to have these feelings．
As a saying says，to be appreciated as a parents is quite unusual．It is quit sure that parents are willing to do theirbest to give us as possible as they can．We should understandthe good intentions of parents．They must have been for your own good．As a high school student，our studies are important and very heavy．There are many advantages of mobile phone，checking dictionaries，listening to music，checkinginformation and so on．But there is also a lot of harm，such as improper use，indeed affect the study and life．We should try our best to study and make great progress．
I hope things will be better for you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
It is quit sure that parents are willing to do their best to give us as possible as they can
很肯定，家長(zhǎng)們都愿意盡自己最大的努力給我們盡可能好的東西．
高分句型二：
There are many advantages of mobile phone，checking dictionaries，listening to music，checking information and so on．
手機(jī)有很多優(yōu)點(diǎn)如檢字典，聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，查資料等等．

解答 Dear Li Yan，
   It's normal to have these feelings．As a saying says，to be appreciated as a parents is quite unusual．It is quit sure that parents are willing to do their best to give us as possible as they can（高分句型一）．We should understand the good intentions of parents．They must have been for your own good．As a high school student，our studies are important and very heavy．There are many advantages of mobile phone，checking dictionaries，listening to music，checking information and so on（高分句型二）．But there is also a lot of harm，such as improper use，indeed affect the study and life．We should try our best to study and make great progress．
I hope things will be better for you soon!
                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開(kāi)放性作文給出一定的寫(xiě)作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．