Question

【題目】假如你是某中學(xué)高二學(xué)生。3月5日是學(xué)雷鋒日，你們班組織了一次志愿者活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面四幅圖所提供的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和過(guò)程寫(xiě)一篇英文短文，為你校�？�英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)欄投稿。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右。

提示詞匯：in memory of；voluntary；

a heated discussion；

nursing home；cleaning；

daily English expression；

performance；

learned from；realize

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Answer 1

【答案】Our class planned to organize a voluntary activity on March 5th in memory of Lei Feng. After a heated discussion, we decided to get to a nursing home to do something for the elderly.

On March 5th, we set out early in the morning. Upon our arrival, we first did a thorough cleaning. Some swept and mopped the floor while the others cleaned the windows and some washing. In addition, we gave wonderful performances for the elderly and taught them some daily English expressions. All the elderly had a good time with us.

We’ve really learned a lot from the experience. We also realize that we can make ourselves useful to those in need.

【解析】

這是一篇看圖作文。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一篇看圖作文：假如你是某中學(xué)高二學(xué)生。3月5日是學(xué)雷鋒日，你們班組織了一次志愿者活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面四幅圖所提供的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和過(guò)程寫(xiě)一篇英文短文，為你校�？�英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)欄投稿。

第2步：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：planned to organize a voluntary activity（計(jì)劃組織一個(gè)志愿活動(dòng)）；After a heated discussion（一個(gè)激烈的討論之后）；set out early in the morning（大清早出發(fā)）；some daily English expressions（一些日常的英語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)）；等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀(guān)的卷面是非常重要的。