Question

下圖描繪的是某家心理診療所醫(yī)生正向病人介紹治病良方的漫畫。請你根據(jù)對這幅漫畫的理解用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。

要點(diǎn)提示：描述漫畫內(nèi)容；結(jié)合實(shí)際，簡述自己的理解與啟發(fā)。
注意：1.陳述所給要點(diǎn)，可適度發(fā)揮。
　　2. 詞數(shù)150 左右。
　　3. 作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Answer 1

As is described in the picture, a person was persuaded into a smalll cage, who was told he would be cured of his fear of snakes, heights, small spaces and commitment in just six hours in that way. Additionally, the cage, with some snakes inside, was high up on four columns.
According to my understanding, the picture describes a person with some mental disability, as a result of which, he prefers to stay in large spaces with other’s company. However, the doctor is trying all his out to help the person, supposing that it’s more difficult for such patients to recover if they are only treated by means of pleasing them. Instead of offering him medicine, the doctor has his unique way of treating this patient, pushing him to face his problems directly.
From my perspective, life is filled with ups and downs. It goes beyond doubt that under no circumstances should we avoid challenges or responsibility. Quite the contray, we are supposed to face them with courage and wisdom.

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是一篇圖畫類寫作。這類題一般要求考生仔細(xì)看圖，根據(jù)題目要求寫成自己的作文。實(shí)際上，圖畫作文也可以當(dāng)作三段式的提綱作文來寫。第一段用來描述圖畫并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句話來概括就可以)，第二段分析原因，最后一段發(fā)表評論或提出建議，其中第二、三段應(yīng)該是寫作的重點(diǎn)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如persuade into，cure of，according to，as a result of, prefer to，by means of，instead of， be filled with， be supposed to；還運(yùn)用句型as及which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句。并注意了句子的銜接如：additionally，however，or 等等。