【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I am travelling back with my parents from seeing my grandparents then it started to snow. At first, I thought it was fun and everything looked beautifully. I was looking forward to make a snowman in the playground at school the next day, and suddenly the car drove off road and into a channel. My father called the rescue team, but they said that would be a long time before they could reach us. However, we sang songs and told stories to pass the time. Several hour later, the rescue team pulled their car out of the channel. At last, we managed to drive very slowly to home. I would never forget this experience.

【答案】

【1】am改為was

【2】then改為when

【3】beautifully改為beautiful

【4】make改為making

【5】off后加the

【6】that改為it

【7】However改為T(mén)herefore

【8】hour改為hours

【9】their改為our

【10】刪除to

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，講述了我和父母親在看望爺爺奶奶回來(lái)的路上突遇暴雪，汽車掉進(jìn)隧道以后，我們一起唱歌講故事等待救援人員幫助的故事。

【1】am改為was 考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)后半句中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞started to snow使用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)，可知全文敘述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，所以本句使用was。句意：我正和父母親看望爺爺奶奶回來(lái)的路上。在這時(shí)開(kāi)始下雪了。

【2】then改為when 考查連詞。本句是一個(gè)固定句式：be doing sth when......正在做某事在這時(shí).....；其中when意為“在那時(shí)”后句表示意料之外的事情，引導(dǎo)并列句。句意：我正和父母親看望爺爺奶奶回來(lái)的路上。在這時(shí)開(kāi)始下雪了。

【3】beautifully改為beautiful 考查形容詞。本句中形容詞beautiful和系動(dòng)詞look連用構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)。句意：起初我認(rèn)為下雪很有趣，一切看起來(lái)會(huì)很漂亮。

【4】make改為making 考查動(dòng)名詞。動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)look forward to sth/doing sth期待sth/做某事；其中的to是介詞，后面要接名詞或動(dòng)名詞做賓語(yǔ)。所以本句中使用了動(dòng)名詞making在句中做賓語(yǔ)。

【5】off后加the 考查定冠詞。在英語(yǔ)中定冠詞the表示特指，所以本句中the road特指我們開(kāi)車正走著的路。

【6】that改為it 考查代詞。本句是一個(gè)固定句式：It be+一段時(shí)間+before從句，意為“一段呢時(shí)間以后某事才發(fā)生”。其中的代詞it指代時(shí)間。

【7】However改為T(mén)herefore 考查副詞。句意：救援人員說(shuō)要很久以后他們才能找到我們，因此我們唱歌并講故事來(lái)消磨時(shí)間。上下文之間是因果關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以使用副詞therefore表示“因果關(guān)系”。

【8】hour改為hours 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。名詞“hour小時(shí)”是一個(gè)可數(shù)名詞，前面有several修飾，說(shuō)明應(yīng)該使用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【9】their改為our 考查代詞。本句中our指代“父母親和我”，指救援人員把我們的汽車開(kāi)除了隧道。

【10】刪除to 考查副詞。本句中“home”是一個(gè)副詞，要單獨(dú)使用，前面不能加介詞。類似的結(jié)構(gòu)有：on the way home在回家的路上。

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