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【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。

文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

It was warm and sunny, so we decide to go for a swim. When I reached to the beach, my friends were already there. The sea was perfect, appearing as smoothly as a mirror. I felt quite pleased with it, and my friends were a little disappointing as they liked huge waves. When we got hungry and thirsty, we bought some hotdog and drinks from a nearby shop. After that, we became energetic enough for a football game. It surprised all was that my team won game. Then we relaxed for a while, sleep on the beach. At about half past four, we packed up my things and went home. We really had fun.

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【解析】1.句意：天氣溫暖、陽(yáng)光明媚，所以我們決定去游泳。根據(jù)前面的was可知句子用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，故把decide---decided。

2.句意：當(dāng)我到達(dá)海灘，朋友已經(jīng)在那里。此處reach到達(dá)，是及物動(dòng)詞，后面直接跟到達(dá)的地點(diǎn)，故把the去掉。

3.句意：顯現(xiàn)出同鏡子一樣光滑。此處appear顯現(xiàn)出，是連系動(dòng)詞，后面用形容詞做表語(yǔ)，故把smoothly---smooth。

4.句意：我感到高興，而我的朋友感到有點(diǎn)失望。前后是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把and---but。

5.句意：而我的朋友感到有點(diǎn)失望。故把disappointing--- disappointed。

6.some一些，修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故把hotdog--- hotdogs。

7.句意：使所有人都感到驚訝的是我們的隊(duì)贏了比賽。主語(yǔ)從句做主語(yǔ)，從句缺少引導(dǎo)詞和主語(yǔ)，what有雙重作用，故把It---What。

8. 句意：使所有人都感到驚訝的是我們的隊(duì)贏了比賽。此處表示特指，故在game前加the。

9.句意：我們放松了一會(huì)兒，睡在海灘上。此處是現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀態(tài)，故把sleep---sleeping。

10.句意：我們收起我們的東西回家。根據(jù)句意可知把my---our。