Question

假定你是李華, 你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫回信。

要點(diǎn):

1. 參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班;

2. 看中文書刊、電視節(jié)目；

3. 學(xué)唱中文歌曲；

4. 交中國(guó)朋友。

注意: 1. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2. 開頭語已為你寫好；

3. 詞數(shù)100左右。

Dear Peter,

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV programs and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.

Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try and write me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求給朋友回信，介紹學(xué)好中文的方法。書信是同學(xué)們熟悉的寫作體裁，而且信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，所以寫作時(shí)不需要注意書信的格式，這使得文章的寫作更加容易。在寫作前要確定文章的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，根據(jù)本文要求可以判斷應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第一人稱。寫作要點(diǎn)也就是學(xué)習(xí)中文的方法要包括四個(gè)方面，即1. 參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班;2. 看中文書刊、電視節(jié)目；3. 學(xué)唱中文歌曲；4. 交中國(guó)朋友。在寫作時(shí)需用適當(dāng)表示順序的詞來進(jìn)行上下文的銜接，以增加文章的可讀性和層次性。此外，還要盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯和多種句式來提高文章檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇范文首先開門見山提出寫信的目的，也就是如何學(xué)好中文。然后在第二段和第三段介紹了幾種有效的方法。在寫作時(shí)作者運(yùn)用了Here are a few suggestions.作為過渡句，引出了要講述的要點(diǎn)。然后在介紹方法，給出建議時(shí)用First, Then, Besides, 等連接詞，使文章內(nèi)容連貫，而且有了很強(qiáng)的層次性。此外，作者還運(yùn)用了狀語從句as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. 和because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.，非謂語結(jié)構(gòu) asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well等增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。.

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