【題目】玫瑰市上星期發(fā)生強(qiáng)烈的地震，災(zāi)情嚴(yán)重，各地紛紛向玫瑰市伸出援手。學(xué)校將舉辦一場慈善義賣會,為災(zāi)區(qū)人民募集善款。假定你是班長李華，請你寫一封書面通知，通知全班同學(xué)參加，要點包括：
1).活動背景：玫瑰市受災(zāi)情況介紹
2).活動目的：通過義賣籌集善款幫助受災(zāi)人民
3).內(nèi)容：慈善物品拍賣，義演。
4).時間:本周六下午14:30
5).地點：學(xué)校操場。
注意：⑴須包括以上主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；
⑵詞數(shù)：120左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
⑶參考詞匯：玫瑰市 Rose City 慈善義賣會 charity bazaar 義演 charity performance
Dear classmates,

【答案】Dear classmates,

I'm here to announce that there is going to be charity bazaar held by our school, which is meant for the people seriously afflicted by the earthquake that happened the week before in Rose City.

As is known to us all, the earthquake has flattened numerous houses and cracked countless roads, resulting in a formidable situation where a large number of people are reduced to bitter sufferings. It is urgent for us to do something for them. Therefore, we plan to hold a charity bazaar where various items donated by us students will be on sale to raise money for the people in need. There is going to be a singing concert as well. It is on the playground at 2:30 pm this Saturday that we will gather together to make this meaningful event happen.

Come and join us. We would be glad to see you then.


【解析】本文屬于提綱作文。本文是在寫一書面通知，即以書面的形式表達(dá)通知的內(nèi)容，其特點是：措辭較嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，句子結(jié)構(gòu)相對復(fù)雜，尤其會使用一些復(fù)雜的句式和從句。提綱式作文的一點技巧。1、審題。要看清題意，確定文章的中心思想、主題，并圍繞中心思想組織材料。2、進(jìn)行構(gòu)思，列出簡單的提綱。安排好層次段落，鋪設(shè)好過渡，處理好開頭和結(jié)尾。3、擴(kuò)展成文。擴(kuò)展成文時還需注意以下方面問題：1)確保提綱中段落結(jié)構(gòu)的思路與各段主題句的一致性。2)要靈活運用各種句式，如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、省略句、主從復(fù)合句、對比句、分詞短語、介詞短語等，從而增加文章的可讀性。注意使用高級框架結(jié)構(gòu)的句子，讓文章的結(jié)構(gòu)錯落有致。3)用好連接詞，注意段落間、句子間的連貫性。文章層次分明，前后表達(dá)渾然一體。4、完稿修改（拼寫是否正確，時態(tài)及語態(tài)，主謂是否一致等）。

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