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近年來,禽流感頻發(fā),一些國家在疫區(qū)捕殺所有鳥類。對此,你們班開展了主題班會,討論結(jié)果如下:

注意:

1.為使行文流暢,應(yīng)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),不能逐條翻譯。

2.詞數(shù)在120左右

3.參考詞匯:禽流感bird flu;家禽poultry;病毒virus;疫苗vaccine

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答案:
解析:

  評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):

  1、要點分

  (1)事件背景分:1分(2)4個觀點的要點分:8分,自己的態(tài)度:2分(3)細(xì)節(jié)補充分4分(注:如果某個要點上出現(xiàn)語法或表達(dá)錯誤等,該要點只能得一半分)

2、整體把握分

  (1)時態(tài)分:2分(2)思想內(nèi)容正確、語言流暢、連詞等的運用:5分(3)亮點分:3分(包括:詞匯、語言點的恰當(dāng)運用,分析事件深刻等)

  根據(jù)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)給例文評分:

  As it is well-known that bird flu has spread through many countries.They have take some measurements to prevent it.(事件背景分:1分)

  Some think it is necessary to kill all the poultry and birds.At present it is only a good way to prevent the deadly virus from spreading and harming people’s health(要點1,2分)The more the virus spreads to, the more difficult it is to conquer it(要點2,2分)

  However, others think it is unfair and awfully cruel to do so just for the benefit of human beings(要點3,2分)Finding vaccines as quickly as possible is the most important think(要點4,2分)

  As far as I’m concerned, catching and killing birds is not necessary.It may cause the birds to die out.Also, birds are friends to us human beings(自己的態(tài)度,2分)

  其他分:

  文章不是逐條翻譯,而是恰當(dāng)?shù)难a充了細(xì)節(jié):4分

  文章時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時是正確的:2分

  文章思想內(nèi)容正確、語言流暢,正確運用了連詞:5分

  文章有諸多亮點:3分


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